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for Goodnight Kiss

by DarkFae

schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hard, fast and damn sexy! That is one hell of a scene!
person Laini
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY u updated! *dances* great chappie,cant wait for more! update soon k? ^_^
person Mariam
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
He decided that if Cloud was stupid enough to turn her down, that he couldn’t have her.

Hell yay! Rock hard, Vincent!
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
She knew. Goddammit, that vixen knew he was on his last legs of denying her and was actively seeking to break his will at this point.
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She had something in her hand… hotel shampoo. She wasn’t…

Mother of Christ she was.



Aeris is rocking fuckin' hard! That's hilarious! ^______^


He half moaned, half laughed some comment about going to hell as the wall came crashing down after all the cracks and crumbles she had thrown at it.

That is a fucking great line. I can totaly picture Vincent giving a quirky little smile and saying that. Awesome!

And then there was just the sound of breathing under the whine of the shower. Tingling nerves and hot steam. Cheap shampoo and sex. He held her there for a moment, with his chin on her shoulder, slumped in defeat.

Another awesome line. An excellent description of the scene. I can imagine it right in my head. Fuckin' A!


person silver
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
finally! those two seem so good together in this (i don't usually read Vin/Aerith) well done!
person Laini
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great chappie,yes they did but it was a nice sin too *wink* i loved it,cant wait to read more! ^_^update soon k?
person FoxyBlue
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...I like it ^^ don't know why but I like it. Must...read...more!
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Drunk!Cid is fucking hilarious. He kicks my ass! You rock hard! :)
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ya lousy kid, am-fuckin-scray! …

That is, quite possibly, the best Cid-line EVER. Am-fucking-scray! I wish I'd thought of that first! That made me laugh! ^_^
person silver
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol, very nice