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for Shattered Dreams

by Crya2Evans

person Dree
schedule September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Sephiroth.

WHAT DID SHE SAY TO HIM??? I WILL CUT HER IF SHE HURT HIM!!!!

ahem..... I demand answers.... and soon....

The chapter was done very well, and I feel bad for poorvinny and sephy, so that woman must suffer at my hand, I will remove her...... death
person Ri
schedule September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Gah i wish i had a guy make me a necklace from a materia he loved the most! how cool would that be having materia...anyways! Awwww Nanaki is so sweet. flt this chapter so short but still very good like your others. I will never get tired of saying that. I can't wait to see how Sephiroth is going to react when he knows the truth! and nothing but the truth!And Zack i love hos he teased Sephiroth! Heh heh you sure you don't mean another certain dark haired man. XD Gah that cracked me up! Love heir friendship in this story. Update soon! I can't wait for more!!
person Dree
schedule September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That's so sweet! Sephy and zack are such good friends.... awww.....


*hands over cookie jar*

enjoy!
person ayachan
schedule September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awww.. go sephiroth.. go and continue to have a nice cute friendship w/ zack again XD can't wait for sephiroth to meet lucrecia! good luck and keep up the good work! :)
person Ri
schedule September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Reeve is missing children in his life!! IMO =P But awwww Reeve was so hapy with Marlene and denzel! he would make a wonderful papa!! And Reno a silly parent. XD Anyways loved this chapter so much emotion, i mean with reeve feeling the empty piece deep within him, Tseng also feeling all the frustration and confusion, but then yay for wonderful Aeris for giving him such comforting words. i love her to death. Anyways! Glad she was able to help him relax a bit, so sweet of her as always. ^_^ Loved the chapter long but so much enjoyment so much emotion going on and i can't wait to read what will happen! And will Reeve ever confess he feels something missing to Reno? Will Tseng and Sephiroth finally have some lone time together for some action? Of course i know there won't be anything happening between them for a while. *Imagines it instead* I can wait!! =3 Tune in next time! XD Sorry my last sentence felt like the announcer dudes from those classic 60s and 70s shows like the classic batman. XD That was random. Update soon! I can't wait!! ^______________^
person ayachan
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i'm sure that i, like many others, had an inkling when elena first met zack.. i thought they were cute.. but i was still for zack/sephiroth, lol.. but as long as everyone is happy in the end, i'm happy... lol, tseng thinking that if his house and office were orderly, then his life would fall into order as well- that's a pretty awesome line of thought
person Ri
schedule September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
SephirothxTseng sitting in a tree!! K-i-S-S-I-N-G! XD Anyways great chapter! Yay Tseng and Sephiroth must now get it on!! BRING IT! Anyways update soon i wanna read some SepxTseng loving! Jk jk i want to read more of your writing of course...and some loving! ^_^
person Dree
schedule September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sephiroth and Tseng are going to do it! *giggle*


Have a cookie! No have an entire jar!
person ayachan
schedule September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sooo... it sounds like zack will be w/ elena and sephiroth with tseng? that's cute.. tseng needs to get laid anyway XD i must say that the fight scene between zack and tseng was very cute and awesome. can't wait for the next chapter!
person Ri
schedule September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow i squeeled when i read the conditions of the children! Awesome and awww this chapter was sweet filled with what i enjoy. eee a daughter, wait did i know that already? O-o anyways so cute! gah and barret is going to ask Elmyra that is so cute!!! OMG YAY WEDDINGS!! I hipe Yuffie can find someone for archer too cause he is a cool guy and he needs someone too. Anyways loved this chapter. Keep it up! well you do which is great! Update!!