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for Shattered Dreams

by Crya2Evans

person tee
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. God. That was marvellous. The dream, OF COURSE, teh hotness. *worships* (yes, Reeves startled moment was great lol!) And I have to admit, that I have a weakness for Rude. He's one of the funniest persons I know and he doesn't even do much, usually. lol You made something wonderful out of him :D And then.. everything fell. omg wanna know what's going on so badly! Oh, an' Reno.. Get your bitchy ass back to teh man! Or a callbox lol No, rly Oh, exciting! Can't wait. *blinks*... ( too much coffee )
person margyy
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i didnt know rude was from Gonganga..hmm but if reno goes there he might find vincent! hurray! and why are you breaking up all the good couples.. to soo not fair.. ;-;
person The+Unknown+Red+Shadow
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*gasp* Will Shera's mother be alright? Will Reno and Reeve ever make up? And what about Cid?! Oh, all these questions! With no answers...Cant wait till your next update, *bouncing with anticipation* I cant wait to see what happens next!
person Jessifer
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh noooo! I can't wait for the next chapter!

A few side-thoughts:

-Poor Reeve. :( He needs a hug. Or a good lay.
-It's kinda weird knowing that they're eatting chocobo...
-Gasp! Mebbe Rude will find Vincent!
-What's got the doctor worried about Shera's pregnancy?
-Will Rude turn on his PHS now?
-Will ANYONE on Highwind realize what's going on?
-I need some chocolate...
person Cidsa
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter :D
Reno is so stubborn, he's all mad at Reeve but won't even let him apologize or anything. @.@
I hope Reno runs into Vincent in Gongaga, I really really want to see Cid and Vincent back together again! T_T

This is going really great and I really don't mind that there isn't much smut. The story is just so great that I could read it even if there was no smut at all (that's just an extra bonus ^_~)
Keep it up!
person arora_kayd
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
[ch 6] Aww! Poor Reeve! He needs his woobie back.
Ha! Rude is so the girl of the relationship. Lol.
0MGZ!!! YES! Go Rude go! (I think he's about to become my new favorite person!) ::bounces:: 'Zack'! wheee. Aww, he's going to be so confused though! What's going to happen when they meet? What's going to happen when 'Zack' and Cid meet?! When will they meet? Will he even go with Reno?! ahh! ::explodes::

Hope you can update soon ^.^
Now i must go a read all the theories. :]
person Miko
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. Poor, poor Reeve. Poor, Poor Reno. It makes me wanna cry.... But I like the way that you seem to be tying all the sub-stories into one, slowly but surely. Just what will Reno find? .....I wish I knew....
person LordIckarous
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
het..*shudders*

I hate cliffhangers! I hate it I hate it I haaaaate it! *cries*

^_^ Uncle Renooooo!
person SpitedThrice20
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Let me say this..... the smut was great !! Although I will admit I laughed my head off when Reeve realized it was all a dream !! LOL ! I agree that you're probably better off making smut scenes dreams until you can pair up the couples again. Keep writing PLEASE !!! I'm waiting for Cid and "Zack" to finally meet up !! LOL!!
person Levi
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ONGZ...been meaning to review for a while, never had the time.

Rude and Shera are so perfect for each other. *Now officially a Rude/Shera fan* Shera's got the man whipped. :o

Go, Reno! GOOOOOO!