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February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aah. Quite a list of Shattered Stories there. I'm probably looking forward to ST the most, aside from all of the archs with Cid/Vin in them. Yuffie/Nanaki is my second favorite couple in your stories. :)
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February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great, wonderful, entertaining..... what else can I say ? Keep going because I have to see how it all ends !!! Oh I also decided to ID myself... just so you didn't have to type the silly question marks ! LOL !
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February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So..much...shattering..must read..ALL!
i just got my friend into your story! i am happy!
i just got my friend into your story! i am happy!
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February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You had me all excited thinking there was a new chapter already - but the news of your Shattered Arch has me just as excited! XD
I'm already looking forward to ST (cuz I love your Yuffie and Nanaki) as well as SC; I can't wait to see just how you pull that off, definitely will prove to be interesting!
I'm already looking forward to ST (cuz I love your Yuffie and Nanaki) as well as SC; I can't wait to see just how you pull that off, definitely will prove to be interesting!
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February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
[Ch 4] The plot thickens! [cue dramatic music]
No! Cid! Bad time to be stubborn! Bad time! Noooo!
Awww. Poor 'Zack'! But, but, he kinda remebered Cid! YAY! (is it wrong that part of me is glad she when bye-bye? probably...)
o.0 'Zack' is manly! One twist and down Azamat goes! Bam. ^_______^
I totally understand what's happening at the moment (i think...) but I have no idea where you're going ^-^ I just know i'm quite intrigued...
Thanks for updateing!
No! Cid! Bad time to be stubborn! Bad time! Noooo!
Awww. Poor 'Zack'! But, but, he kinda remebered Cid! YAY! (is it wrong that part of me is glad she when bye-bye? probably...)
o.0 'Zack' is manly! One twist and down Azamat goes! Bam. ^_______^
I totally understand what's happening at the moment (i think...) but I have no idea where you're going ^-^ I just know i'm quite intrigued...
Thanks for updateing!
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February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hello! woow alot is going on, poor cid! i feel so bad! but Im guessing those 4 deamons in the cave were the ones who wereinside vincent, and the guy talking at theend is a summon trying to talk to vincent and diablos... . >.<
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February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow....Your story's are AMAZING!!! Though I have never taken the time to review them, I think I will start to. This chapter poises a lot of questions, and I cant wait to read the next chapter. ^_^ Keep up the good work!
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February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh noez! Run Zack, run! And stop ignoring the Demi-God, damn you!
Great chapter. I love how his instincts are kicking in. Poor Vinny tho, has no idea what's going on. Also, I honestly didn't expect Annalee to die so soon. I felt bad for her. She didn't deserve it. :(
Great chapter. I love how his instincts are kicking in. Poor Vinny tho, has no idea what's going on. Also, I honestly didn't expect Annalee to die so soon. I felt bad for her. She didn't deserve it. :(
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February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really wish I could go back and edit my comments.
Replying to l-chan:
Ever think that mebbe Archer actually just wants to help Cid...genuinly? I mean...if he did actually try a move on Cid (or Vin later on, who knows?) then yeah, he'll deserve a horrible death by sporkage. But he has yet to do anything. Seems to me that he just wants Cid to be happy.
Replying to l-chan:
Ever think that mebbe Archer actually just wants to help Cid...genuinly? I mean...if he did actually try a move on Cid (or Vin later on, who knows?) then yeah, he'll deserve a horrible death by sporkage. But he has yet to do anything. Seems to me that he just wants Cid to be happy.
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February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, just WOW. Battle scene = THE AWESOME! And Annalee's death scene = DOUBLE THE AWESOME! So wonderfully done! I so love it when a whole town is annihilated by random acts of violence! *wipes away tear*
The imagery is wonderfully vivid too! Your descriptive talents are spot on, so it’s not like I’m reading flowery script but instead it flows so naturally that I can picture the scenes as they happen and don’t have to worry about being caught up in purple prose. ^_^o
And it’s probably just me equating the two things, but when you had Annalee say “And perhaps making new ones,” and then BAM! The poor girl dies; it really brings full circle how fragile life is and how quickly dreams can be crushed… by a falling ceiling.
I’m really liking the Demi-Gods as well. Can’t wait to see where you’re going with all of it, it’s keeping me on the edge of my seat! I reread this chapter twice already cuz it was that GOOD!
Now my customary: u.p.d.a.t.e. s.o.o.n. p.l.z.~
Reply for the Archer Wars:
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ASDLFKJASLDKFJALSD!!!!!NO! (my inner fangirl talking) The man’s got ulterior motives – MOTIVES! Even if he doesn’t realize it himself. They’re there, lurking in his subconscious.. cuz come on, why would he go into the shipping business with Cid – and suggest it himself? He’s sticking around waiting for the chance ta strike! I know it! Why else hasn’t he gone & found himself someone else or bloody hell, bothered looking? Cuz he’s a creepy stalker that’s why. Gave up what he had and now he wants it back! I’m just glad Cid’s too smart for him (or more aptly put, dwelling in angst ^_^ ). BTW – I am not to be taken seriously, but I’m sure ya know that!
The imagery is wonderfully vivid too! Your descriptive talents are spot on, so it’s not like I’m reading flowery script but instead it flows so naturally that I can picture the scenes as they happen and don’t have to worry about being caught up in purple prose. ^_^o
And it’s probably just me equating the two things, but when you had Annalee say “And perhaps making new ones,” and then BAM! The poor girl dies; it really brings full circle how fragile life is and how quickly dreams can be crushed… by a falling ceiling.
I’m really liking the Demi-Gods as well. Can’t wait to see where you’re going with all of it, it’s keeping me on the edge of my seat! I reread this chapter twice already cuz it was that GOOD!
Now my customary: u.p.d.a.t.e. s.o.o.n. p.l.z.~
Reply for the Archer Wars:
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ASDLFKJASLDKFJALSD!!!!!NO! (my inner fangirl talking) The man’s got ulterior motives – MOTIVES! Even if he doesn’t realize it himself. They’re there, lurking in his subconscious.. cuz come on, why would he go into the shipping business with Cid – and suggest it himself? He’s sticking around waiting for the chance ta strike! I know it! Why else hasn’t he gone & found himself someone else or bloody hell, bothered looking? Cuz he’s a creepy stalker that’s why. Gave up what he had and now he wants it back! I’m just glad Cid’s too smart for him (or more aptly put, dwelling in angst ^_^ ). BTW – I am not to be taken seriously, but I’m sure ya know that!