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for Shattered Dreams

by Crya2Evans

person Drac
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! You kick @$$!

This totally RULES!!!!

person tee
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I see nothing, lol. Only a chap with great action! Although I have the feeling, that at the "end" someone will feel some guilt? I dunno... It's late, lol. I'm curious about what'll happen, oh yes.
person LordIckarous
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Zack...uh...kind of got a Vincent thing going on? No? AAAAHHHHH! I don't know! Oh but i hope it's what i think it is. DMN IT! I am on the phone with my friend right now disscusing what could be going on..haha, i know sad. but i must know!

person Miko
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was a tad bit confused the first time I read it, but I went back for a second go and I think I have a vague notion of what might be happening. I am assuming the demons conversing after the Cid scene are the main baddies and that Vincent is the only vessel for the ones who can defeat them (Am I even close?). Ovbiously, regardless of whether I am right or not, there is something about dear Vince that has all the demon legions out to kill him, but his old Turk training (Gods bless the Turks) seems to be saving his life, as well as opening doors to long, lost memories... Oh, and there seems to be several good demon-like things hidden in his mind, not able to break through to him because of some barrier he may or may not be projecting subconsiously.... Did I forget something? Well, anyways. That's just my guess.
person Cidsa
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter :D
Poor Cid, he's really mad isn't he?

Anyways, I can't wait for the next one. I check for a new chapter constantly and it's always awesome to see that there is a new one!
person Jessifer
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...Am I the only one who actually LIKES Archer?
person l-chan
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I shouldn't do this... and it's a testament to how this fic needs its own forum; but as I was checking for updates I have to answer Jessifer: I can only speak for myself in the case of Archer. And I still want to stab him in the kidney. XD

And tell him ta get a life and move on and he doesn't deserve ta breath the same air as Cid. You are SO not worthy Archer! You... creepy stalker (not really but go with it) person! *rantrantrant*

Maybe if the chance presents itself I can do an actual 'Archer rant'~ That would be fun~ (Unless my prior psychobabble can be considered as rant - then it'll just be another rant. ^_~ )
person l-chan
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is too good! ♥ I adore your writing for the Cid/Vincent, but your characterization of Yuffie has me actually liking her! *gasps* You write her extremely well and the part where she figuratively smacked down Archer (yes I still want to stab him in the kidney) had me pumping my fist in the air in glee. ^_^

Also, it was of my opinion that SI covered quite thoroughly the different pairings you’ve included. I really – really enjoy that! You write the compilations wonderfully without it feeling at all choppy. It flows so beautifully together and touches on all the characters incredibly well.

I can’t help but giggle at Yuffie and Nanaki, they are just too cute! You win at life for that pairing, and doing it SO DAMN GOOD!

I also had no clue as to what they had found. I’m truly lost as to where you’re going with this fic, and OMG I love it being that way! XD You’ve also got me dying to see what’s going to happen when Vincent and Cid finally cross paths… or if Vincent will remember before they cross paths… or …whatever it is you have planned! And just between you & me… I’ve been trying to imaging what exactly that will be like… but all I envision is Vincent’s gun accidentally discharging – striking Miz Anna-Sue dead, ricocheting off the inside of her empty skull, and then piercing Archer’s right lung *insert bloody wheezing death scene here*.

Ah… yeah. ^_^;; Soooo~ if you want me to stop entertaining ways to kill the two of them I could suggest an update soon? ^_~
person Twich
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*glues eyes to screen waiting for update* 0_O must...read..!
person Jessifer
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, Cid likes his tea strong, Nanaki with milk, Yuffie with lots of sugar...and me? I likes my tea with lots of angst!

Great chapter. ;D