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for Shattered Dreams

by Crya2Evans

person Miko
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter, I'm glad I decided to check and see if you updated. The story's really getting tense, huh? Poor Cid... Not knowing that Vincent's been out there the whole time, just not remembering anything. I also liked the way you added a little light-heartedness and humor in the Yuffie/Nanki scene. Angst and drama are well and good, but some happiness is appreciated. Not everyone can be sad all of the time.
person LordIckarous
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Drama? I can never get enough drama! *break dances*. But no...i have figured out nothing. i am about as bright as a brick, so unless someone comes right out and tell me things i won't catch it. ^_^' But still wonderful!

oh vince...*cries*
person arora_kayd
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahh! Why they be so mean to Cid? Now he's gonna kill Reeve d-e-d ded.

Definetly enough drama and angst. I was bouncing through the entire scene. Which probably doesn't say much for my mental health.... But who cares! Twas prudy. What is goin to happen next?!?!?!

Oh also, yay for subplots! They were there in SI but i just had to mention my love of them ^.^

Update soon!!!

(You're very welcome. Glad you enjoy my rambly comments ^^)
person tee
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woo Now what.. Suprise! But, oh, I think I could feel Cid's rage physically when I read this. It blew me right off of my chair, lol. I feel so so SO sorry for him.. Poor Reeve, though. He only tries to do his best..
Gee! Great job!
person ????????
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that was AMAZING !!!! I could've died from how much angst and drama that occured !!! I can't wait to see what happens next !!!!! YAY !!!!!!
person margyy
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ello! Poor everybody! there all so sad and unhappy =\ awww but its still really good ^__^
person arora_kayd
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh teh aaannnngst!

yay ^.^

Cid needs a hug so bad! ;.;
And to eat a steak >.>

Aww, poor Reeve. He's trying his best I'm sure
But what the carp did he find???? Geh! I wanna know! And I want Cid to know!

woo hoo! More boy!kissing in SI. Oh I can't wait.

And yes, SD is definetly up to SI's standards ^.^ Update soon! Hope college is good.
person margyy
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey! im happy to see that you have started up the sequel! ^__^ i hope cid finds vincent, other wise i will be really sad..
person tee
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, it's here! And it's so good (as expected^_~)! *joy* Sorry for the curtness, but unfortunately my own headaches are worse then Cids could ever be, lol. Keep it up, ok?^_^
All the best
tee
person l-chan
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I dub thee, Queen of the Angst! Because you are! Q,Q

Argh! I was so close to tears you know. You really know how ta break my fangirly heart! Poor Cid... Although it's cute how worried Reeve is, I hope Reno's just out getting a drink with Rude for Reeve's overtaxed minds sake. I really liked how Reno slipped into the 'street' lingo as well. ^_^ Nifty differentiation you made there when he gets agitated. And OMG - what is up with the foreshadowing of this mysterious 'thing' what-have-you at Cosmo Canyon?! What...WHAT IS IT?! I must know! >_<

Then there's the double reference of Junon now... I'll hope & pray that it actually means something! I swear... if Cid & Vincent's paths cross... and they DON'T manage ta meet each other... I'll scream bloody murder. I SWEAR I WILL. And it will make yer eardrums bleed, OMFG YES. *crosses fingers & says prayer to the yaoi gods*

Well, I for one can't wait to read more!! I thought I was going insane from the time between this chapter and the last - you nearly killed me dead with the wait there! ^_~ Sooooo, UPDATE SOON! (but don't slack in yer schoolwork on account of my unreasonable griping for more ^^)