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January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice! I'm so glad you are writing this quickly like the last one (Shattered Ice). It's really well done and a great read :3
I do have one little nitpick though. At the point where Reno becomes angry he starts speaking really strangely, like very "gangsta, yo", if you know what I mean. While I can understand him doing it a little bit, him going from normal talking to that is really jarring. It made me think it was a different character and such.
Anyways, great chapter. Can't wait for more~
I do have one little nitpick though. At the point where Reno becomes angry he starts speaking really strangely, like very "gangsta, yo", if you know what I mean. While I can understand him doing it a little bit, him going from normal talking to that is really jarring. It made me think it was a different character and such.
Anyways, great chapter. Can't wait for more~
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January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooh! I feel so bad for Cid and Reeve. Poor guys. Great chapter, onna.
Also, small typo I think. ;): "You are just been unreasonably stubborn,” Reeve grumbled.
Shouldn't that be "being"?
Also, small typo I think. ;): "You are just been unreasonably stubborn,” Reeve grumbled.
Shouldn't that be "being"?
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January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*cries* Reeeeeenoooo cooome hoooooome!
Man i am excited about this story! Update soon!
Man i am excited about this story! Update soon!
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January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is totally up to SI standards!!!! i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and wow i'm soo freaked out for cid ;_; he needs to hurry and find vince and be happy again ;_;
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January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay, I'm so happy you are continuing this! :D
Ahh, I hope Cid finds Vincent soon..I can sense the angst to come XD
Can't wait for more, I'll be checking for new chapters often.
Ahh, I hope Cid finds Vincent soon..I can sense the angst to come XD
Can't wait for more, I'll be checking for new chapters often.
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January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh I just LOVE IT !!!! Keep it coming because I SO want to know what's next !!!! I hope "Zack" recovers soon !! lol
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January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Squee! I'm so happy that it's finally up! And with a wonderful first chapter to boot! It raises many questions, such as what exactly happened after the final battle that caused Vince to lose his claw and his crimson eyes. However, I have my speculations. ;D I'm also interested in seeing how the relationship between Vin-err...Zack ;) and Annalee progresses, and how she'd react if he ever did regain his memories. Aah, you've made me a happy woman.
Poor Cid, though. :(
Poor Cid, though. :(
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January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...... wow... wow... wow... yay!!! the sequel has arrived!!! nooo, cid and vincent are just sooo close yet so far..i can't wait until they bump into each other! Zack... ohhh, interesting..... DIE ANNALEE BITCH grrr.. stay away from vincent you woman- he is cid's *growl*! well, good luck w/ your new semester in college and keep up the good work ^^
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January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't review all that often, but when I come across a well written story, I feel I must tell the author. I have read Shattered Ice and I loved every minute of it. I am so happy the sequel is up now. I am looking forward to reading this sequel. I have always love Cid and Vincent together. Keep up the good work and I will review again.
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January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So far, just as good, no doubt will be as well. It took me a week to finish the first series, but Dang! Was it ever good! Keep up tha good work, you got real talent, no doubt again, you already know that. XD