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for Shattered Dreams

by Crya2Evans

person arora_kayd
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Z0MG! I spazzed for like 10 mins. when I saw that you had posted the first chapter. There was much giggling and bouncing and swueeing
And then i read the prologe and was like 'wee! angst.'

And then came chapter one. 0mfg. I spazzed through the entire thing. From figuring out who it was to where he was to whom he was living with to what the called him to the mentioning of Cid (*so close* and yet so far) to the girl to the suggestion of moving on. i was so tempted to yell at the screen 'NO!! Dwell. Dwell on the past! dwelling is good! no het for you! Stay poofy!! Poofy! Don't be mean to Cid."

Oh i can already feel the Angst. Indeed there shall be much of it.

I love you so much for posting. I am seriously addicted to this series. For my sanity, and yours, I hope college isn't too busy for you. Good luck with that. And I shall be eagerly awaiting the next update!!!

YAY!
person l-chan
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AYIIIIIII~!!!!!! *does little victory dance* Finally the sequel! And YEY Vincent's back! Oh my god I love you!

*coughs*

This is already interesting, with how Cid was so close yet so far to finding Vincent. You make me angst along with Cid even though he wasn't technically in the chapter. And believe it or not, I feel no extreme rage at Miss. Mary Sue (aka: Anna-whateverhernameis-Sue). Sure, I pointed at her and told her to: 'Back the hell off', but I feel she shall be out of the way soon enough.

I love what you did with Vincent's character as well! I sort of figured that in the teaser that was him (since you had made mention of him having grey eyes before) but I didn't want to jump to any untoward conclusions.

I'm so damn excited you're finally posting this! *worships* I have been waiting so long for it~ You have totally made my day! XD

That said, Update soon!!!
person LordIckarous
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am honored to be the FIRST person to read it..Woo! I was checking for updates and there i saw 'Shattered Dreams' Hits (0) and i was like "YES ME FIRST MEEE!" I am so so glade you are back and in record time! I can't express how excited i am...ugh..angst, can't wait for that to come into play as well. First chapter, awesome. I got a little confused for a momet, but that is becuase i am slow (how i got into college i will never know). I am so excited. Update when you can! Remember: School is first!