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Since I'm waiting for my next update to Shatter Redux, I've decided to explore your other writings and this one has caught my eye.

This is interwoven with Shatter, I see and nicely done and I'm only on chapter 3. Well, I'm off to read more.

Nemesis ^_~

Your going to end the series?! *cries* but you can't, I'm addicted! It's a very cruel thing to do, you know.

Oh, well *resigned to it*

Wanna update? A cliff-hanger ending such as that is A) NOT NICE and B) VERY NOT NICE!
*breaks down in ters again*

“So pleased that I could be a source of amusement for immortal beings,”

Beautiful line, it describes most of this story so far. I just wonder how everyone else is going to take Vincent's being 'sealed' again. Twisted as some moral codes are in this group, they won't stand for that. If the demideieties aren't careful, they're going to wind up with civil war on their hands. Again.

I like the battle scenes so far, a good balance between tactics, gore, and comedy. Keep it up for four more chapters or so, and you'll be good to go.

Excellent chapter, as always! :)

Yay! Yay! Yay! Okay, I got that out. I thoroughly enjoy your writings, and now a battle soon! So cool! Weeeeee! Can't wait for the next installment! Yay! Yay!

Poor Vince. He just doesn't get any breaks, does he?

Alice Hojo! How the hell did I forget that walking calamity? Mind-control chips... I wonder if they're even theoretically possible. All I really know is that I wouldn't want to tanlge with her, if she can control the Knights of the Round with them. I also have a feeling that there's going to be some double-crossing done between her and the rebelling powers.

Who's doing the setting up, here? Is it the demi-deities that they're fighting, or is it the supposed good ones? Balaam wants Vincent there for some reason (my guess is that he still has a portion of Balaam's power inside him, ergo his being unable to take full physical form), and it seems convienient that there's three powerful demi-dieties left at the Lost Grounds. Our Heroes are walking into a trap.

I really liked the goodbye scene on the rooftop. Showing it from Cloud's perspective was a good choice--he's one of them, but apart, at the same time. He was able to watch Reeve and Reno have a touching moment without giving it too much detail, giving both of them a bit of dignity. Sephiroth and Denzel was absolutely priceless and touching. As my mother would say, "You done good, kid."

Mwhahahaa! :) Oooo, eager to see the next chapter. A Vincent/Cid lemon thrown in sometime soon again would be nice too. :P

Dammit, you made me sniffly again, you wench.

Poor, poor Vince. Mean, selfish Anima. Can't blame them, but I like Vincent better, so there.

Once more, I have to say 'not enough'. I love watching things unfold, even if it's just a little at a time. Want mooooore!

And do you know how happy you made me when you mentioned /sequels/? I'm tempted to bug you for more info on them, but I really like surprises. Enough that I skipped over the preview. =P

Thanks for the newest update!

~SneakyOne

Lol. Cid and Yuffie would laugh through a wedding. Poor Cloud, little slow on the uptake, huh?
Sorry it took me so long to review. Kingdom Hearts II is taking over my brain. :P