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by Crya2Evans

schedule March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Urgh! Tseng and Sephiroth are so frustrating! >.< I just wanna lock them in a room together. Great story, btw. 'Tis very loverly.
person Ri
schedule February 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter! Loved it, the wedding, the plots the wonderful sister! Reeve's sister is so sweet! They will start a family after everything is over. Loved how they prevented poor Tseng from drinking any sort of alochol. This was a sweet and yet emotional chapter. I cannot wait to read more! I always jump for joy when i see your updates. ^^
schedule February 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mwhahahaha! LOVED that chapter! Hopefully Elena will get Tseng and Sephiroth together soon. :P Yum! Loved the part towards the end too with Cid and Vincent and during the wedding... hehe, well, i loved it all! :)
schedule February 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
>>Let me know if you liked it or not!

Like it? Love it!

Sorry I haven't stopped for a review the last few chapters, it's about time I dropped in.

Another nice, long read, but seems far, far too short once the end is reached. I keep wanting to beg you to hurry with the next update, but you'll get it in your own time. The fact that you can keep up with this, and the side projects, all at once, just astounds me - especially looking at how MUCH there is. With this chapter, that makes 99 chapters -just- in the two main ones - Ice and Dreams. AND YOU'RE STILL GOING. That just totally blows my mind.

Thanks for rocking so much.

~SneakyOne
person Samma
schedule February 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah, just what I need after a corperate meeting...

The wedding scene was beautiful, with the right touch of comedy with Reno and Cid's names revealed. I kept having to read bits of it out loud to my fiancee (Kitsuwa), as they were so sweet or comedic. And finally, progress on the Seph/Tseng relationship! You move them along at a very realistic pace, neither one is one to jump straight into bed--though once they move past this dithering stage, I bet that's where they'll end up!

And let me put in that it's not just men Sephiroth has questioning their sexuality... I'd go straight (or at least bi) for him!
person Ri
schedule February 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay this chapter is fasinating! I mean the characters the way it is written like this epic tale like Homer's Odessy! Okay i am being a dork here no but seriously love it, you just write amazingly. I kind of rushed through it though due to me being at work and being tiredbuti will re-read it and of course give a much more proper review but what i read and what i got i believe this interlude is bloody fantastic!
person Samma
schedule February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
One word can easily describe this chapter, but even without coffee, I can't keep it to that. Fascinating.

I love the depth your original demideites have. All you really have to do is change the names of Square's characters and locations, and you have a new epic story. One that I'm sure would be on the bestseller's list for quite some time.

Keep it up. It's one of the few things that keeps me from committing murder at work.
person Pooky
schedule February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It has honestly been ages since I last had internet access, and you can't believe how happy I was to see so many new chapters in this story ^__^ I read the whole thing through again, and all I can do is curse you once again for making me cry and laugh, sometimes simultaneously. Emotional rollercoaster ride indeed. There are just so many things that I like in this story, can't wait to read more. I first began to read the Shattered -storyarchthingumine because of the smut, but now I read this because of the plot :) Um, however, some Sephi/Tseng smut in near future? Please? Pretty please? *puppydog eyes* Not that I completely adore that pairing or anything *shifty eyes*
schedule February 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! :)
person Tant
schedule February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Sephiroth, he's just not having an easy time, is he?
I forgot Vincent didn't have Galian anymore. Oops. ^_^;
I wasn't sure what Gojyo's weapon was called, so I tried to look it up and found both names.