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Excellent chapter! Absolutely loved it! Highwind's family reminds me of mine. lol :P

Yay! Updates! This is a very interesting turn, but you pull it off so well! Cambridge...tee hee hee :giggle giggle: I like it :D Anywho, good job! We all appreciate your work!

Lol. That warning is the funniest thing I've seen all day. I don't know why a het lemon warning struck me as funny but...
The chapter itself was good too. You wrote the het lemon well. Is it safe to assume this won't be the last one? It's nice to see an Elena that's not timid and submissive, especially around the guys.

Love the scene with Cloud and Sephiroth dueling and Cloud telling Sephiroth to lead and be the leader. Ah brings me back to memories when He use to lead. Sexy leader...anyways for the other half O_O OoO *Claps hands over mouth* OoO;;;;;;;; I was shocked yet i thought it was well written. But yet O_O but still i enjoyed the chapter. can't wait to read the rest! And no the arguments will continue in the next chapter? and Cid's family!? OH NOES!! I cannot wait!!! update soon!!

Yummy chapter! LOVED IT! :P

what? what? wow, that's a surprise.. cloud asking sephiroth to lead! and woah, i'm surprised that there is a warning for het lemon too! lol, i never thought that i would see one of those *grins* elena and zack are cute together ^^ i just don't really see her getting laid.. or being seductive either XD.. she seems too... stiff? lol, which is probably why she is getting laid and being all seductive and jazz.. sorry, skipped through the lemon, but i'm sure it was very good- your yaoi ones are, so i'm sure your het. ones are as well. ohhh,, now this is exciting.. i want to know more about the highwind family! i'm guessing that's for shattered children? anyway, good luck and keep up the good work!

*Is gasping and gripping the table with a death grip* HOLY CANNOLIS!! It keeps on getting worse!! WORSE!! So sad and horrible so harsh so omg so much emotion between Cid and Vincent you have no idea who's side you should choose! I mean gah you can be like "I agree with Cid" but then you are wait no "vincent i mean it is cid who does not want to listen" But then you are like damn it all both of you need to sit down and talk!! They need to go see a psychologist!! XD *Sits down with a notebook and in a fancy chair* Let us review their emotions and see what the problem is ya?
Anyways so much is going on with everyone! Cloud for example and well Cid and Vincent had their moments but my gosh it just seems like the fire keeps on growing and there is no sign of it dying down fast! Sigh reason why i love your story. Gah i am going to be dying until i get to read the next chapter. Well update when you can!! BYE!

no! that was horrible! and it's going to get worse? O_O oh man *goes in corner and cries* quite a tense scene there, good job with all of the emotions! *sigh* good luck vincent and cid! lol, and good luck to you too, dracoqueen :)

Hi again! Loved the fight scene. Not because they were fighting but cause it's a chance for them to learn more about each other; love's not just about the sex after all. Keep posting.

Excellent chapter! :) I am definatly eager to see what happens next. Mwhahahaa! :P