rate_review Reviews

Oh god im gonna be sick *throws up* ohhhh...gooood.....*faints*

Ok first off, you are one sick motherfucker. But brilliant work!! A absolutely gripping story, phenomenal! The ending could have been a little better but otherwise good job!

wow...

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i was totally grosed out... yet i couldent look away... your sick man... SICK!

Cool fanfic. People need to realize that this is all FANTASY. IT'S NOT REAL.

Anyways, I've written a Final Fantasy VI snuff fic and working on a Final Fantasy VII one.

Amazing. The flowery language and the long paragraphs really add to the story, while at the same time making it not as disgusting to read as it could be. But I agree with the other posters. You have issues. Keep using those issues to write more, please!

Well, I really should review longer than I am, but considering my brain is fried, I will tell you this. I really liked this fic and it went on my favorites. You have a lot of gumption to post something this vivid.

Two points of advice.

Might want to make your paragraphs shorter...it helps the reader transition through the text with more ease!
Also, you don't wanna write like Dickens, so try to cut out at least SOME of the description. You have beautiful detail, but after a while it gets difficult to read. Otherwise, it was beautiful.

Please write more. I really wanna see a Cloud/Seph fic from you. That would be amazing.
Love ya sweetie.
BG

Curiosity killed the cat. That was...well...the grossest thing I've ever read. Can't believe someone...requested this.

Wow that was amazing! Sick but sickly brilliant! 5 out of 5 thanks for answering my challenge others are open to answer it if you like.