errorYou must be logged in to review this story.
schedule
December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh god im gonna be sick *throws up* ohhhh...gooood.....*faints*
schedule
September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok first off, you are one sick motherfucker. But brilliant work!! A absolutely gripping story, phenomenal! The ending could have been a little better but otherwise good job!
schedule
September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow...
schedule
August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...
schedule
July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i was totally grosed out... yet i couldent look away... your sick man... SICK!
schedule
July 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cool fanfic. People need to realize that this is all FANTASY. IT'S NOT REAL.
Anyways, I've written a Final Fantasy VI snuff fic and working on a Final Fantasy VII one.
Anyways, I've written a Final Fantasy VI snuff fic and working on a Final Fantasy VII one.
schedule
February 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Amazing. The flowery language and the long paragraphs really add to the story, while at the same time making it not as disgusting to read as it could be. But I agree with the other posters. You have issues. Keep using those issues to write more, please!
schedule
January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, I really should review longer than I am, but considering my brain is fried, I will tell you this. I really liked this fic and it went on my favorites. You have a lot of gumption to post something this vivid.
Two points of advice.
Might want to make your paragraphs shorter...it helps the reader transition through the text with more ease!
Also, you don't wanna write like Dickens, so try to cut out at least SOME of the description. You have beautiful detail, but after a while it gets difficult to read. Otherwise, it was beautiful.
Please write more. I really wanna see a Cloud/Seph fic from you. That would be amazing.
Love ya sweetie.
BG
Two points of advice.
Might want to make your paragraphs shorter...it helps the reader transition through the text with more ease!
Also, you don't wanna write like Dickens, so try to cut out at least SOME of the description. You have beautiful detail, but after a while it gets difficult to read. Otherwise, it was beautiful.
Please write more. I really wanna see a Cloud/Seph fic from you. That would be amazing.
Love ya sweetie.
BG
schedule
January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Curiosity killed the cat. That was...well...the grossest thing I've ever read. Can't believe someone...requested this.
schedule
January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was amazing! Sick but sickly brilliant! 5 out of 5 thanks for answering my challenge others are open to answer it if you like.