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April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is an incredible story. Everything is put masterfully into place; plot, character development, continuity. Your writing style immerses the reader from the word "go". Too many writers here are focused purely on smutty oneshots when they have to learn that smut with people you actually believe in (developed characters) is so much better. I'm glad to read a good story for once. Keep up the awesome work!
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December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good work so far :) looking forwards to the next chapter :D
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March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG awesome! I love this story, it's such a different take on things that i've never seen done before.
Cid's one of my favorite characters from the game, (right behind Vincent actually ^.^) so please,
Keep up the great work and update soon!!
--Radgar
Cid's one of my favorite characters from the game, (right behind Vincent actually ^.^) so please,
Keep up the great work and update soon!!
--Radgar
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September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay, I thought you'd discontinued writing this, great to see a new chapter up and looking forward to more in the future.
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February 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
..i have been back 2 check this alot and you hvaen't updated! please tell me youre going to keep writing? i really enjoyed your other story and i want 2 know what is gonna happen next...please keep writing! you are very good
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February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
rock on! *crawls back up onto the face of the planet* forgive the absense, i've been doing that thing called real life. i'm sorry i missed these chapters, they were awesome!!!!! don't be discouraged by the addicts!
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It was... Interesting. I usualy never realy read any fanfiction about Cid. Mostly because the thought of pairing him up with any of the other guys makes me naucious. Cid is one of my favorites though, I just hate seeing him in any Yaoi. He's more of a... creative writing tool. Like what you've done here. I give you props, I realy liked the fic. I just thought the 4th chapter was too short. I like it. I hope you update soon.
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey-o
I like your idea of a Cid back story, and the idea of having it a story-with-smut and not just a smut-story. I've read what you posted so far and I liked it. While I hope to read more, I'd like to throw an ideal at you without causing too much damage: You you also think that Cid's materia using motions from the game looks like he's doing the sign of the cross?
I like your idea of a Cid back story, and the idea of having it a story-with-smut and not just a smut-story. I've read what you posted so far and I liked it. While I hope to read more, I'd like to throw an ideal at you without causing too much damage: You you also think that Cid's materia using motions from the game looks like he's doing the sign of the cross?
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January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have to agree. I don't understand why this only has four stars. I think this is great. I, too, love Cid. And just because your focal point is the story, not the sex, doesn't mean it's not good. I think it's cool. Don't let anyone tell you otherwise! You'll put what you feel needs to be in at the right moments. So don't worry about it.
You know, I never thought of Cid having siblings. I think that's really cool.
You know, I never thought of Cid having siblings. I think that's really cool.
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January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hot damn this is awesome. i never thought bout Cid having sibs beforeand I realy like it., i think yours is the only story i've seen wrote about Cid like this i mean backstory and all. i hope you keep writing it cause its good and you got me hooked!!! i will have to look at your other one to but if its like this then itlll be intresting. good job.