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This was pretty awesome. I had been looking for good Elena and Clloud fic and your story promised a continuation since you talk of consequences. I can't wait, thanks for sharing. Hope to see more.

Nice story! I love the odd pairing!^_^

I really enjoyed this one-shot. Very believable given the situtation they were in. Characterization is great and the action is hot too. 5 stars! ^_^

I'am all wet between my legs if u know what I mean that's how this story left me feeling and I hope to read more just like it.

GREAT story *grins* love this pairing it's like.. so rare there should be more of them.

Anyway I'm kinda hoping against hope for a continuation of this story and I'm NOT above begging either so..... please *BIG puppy dog eyes*

I'm dying for more... I can already see the next chapter in my minds eye "Elena being sick, craving strange food, her body yearning for it's mate, the Turks wondering what's wrong with her *chuckles* (they're a clueless bunch), hers and Clouds romantic,passionate but secret rendevous.
A heavely pregnant Elena while Cloud's on a new LONG mission just to come back and find his own set of blue eyes on two beautiful blonde pigtailed little girls.

Well anyway I do hope you'll think about it and grace us(me) with more chapters 'cause there are way to little fics pairing these two characters.

very well done! hot stuff this!

hhm.. but if you ask me... I'm thinking.. we need another chapter with the consequences of what happened in this first chapter.

This story is soooo hot! It inspired me to write my own ElenaxCloud stories. Would like to see more from you.

I'd want to see what happens when Tseng and co. figure out Elena's little thing with Cloud...

This fic rocked, it has even inspired me to find more cloud elena.