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June 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very, very interesting! I dig the sex, the action, and the plot has a lot more to it than I expected. Looking forward to more!
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May 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooh! I like the way this story is going! Please update again soon! I need more wonderful and delicious Seifer/Zell fanfiction to satisfy my addiction!
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February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
more more more more more more.....please?
update soon, aiyee!
update soon, aiyee!
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February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow. this is really great. i love your characterization of zell and seifer. i was cracking up when you stated the ifrit always talks 'LIKE THIS'. the way he was talking kind of reminds me of Mr. T. anyway, geat job. please continue. ^__^
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February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for all the reviews, everybody. Especially Akare for answering my (endless) questions. I think the GF issue will be set aside for now. I was going to include it, but I think I would just get too far off the plot line. Chapters 4 & 5 are ready to be transcribed (sorry - I do my writing in old fashioned spiral notebooks), then its thinking time. All ideas - comments - plot twists will be considered if they can be worked into the outline. Looking to be about twelve chapters, more or less. Hopefully no more wind storms and power outages.
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February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So glad that you posted another chapter! *fans herself* It's wonderful so far and I hope you continue to update quickly. I'm anxious to see what else Zell has in store for Seifer and if Seifer is really prepared to go along with it. You're building the tension, both external and internal, beautifully. Very well done!
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February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*almost explodes with anticipation* You can't leave it THERE!!! Shit, come on. I've been hanging out for some Seifer/ Zell fics for AGES and you left it THERE!!! *dies from the torture*
Great story though. You better update soon or I WILL stalk you and raid your computer for drafts.
Thank you for momentarily alleviating my addiction *glomps you*
Great story though. You better update soon or I WILL stalk you and raid your computer for drafts.
Thank you for momentarily alleviating my addiction *glomps you*
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February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O.o..... *drooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooools* Oh hyne! That's what I'm taking about! Pwned! Owned! Zell ain't no fraidy cat bitch! You show em! Ya! *high five* Go Zelly, go Zelly, go Zelly!
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February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woah!! hot!! pleas pleas right fast!!!! loved it!!!
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February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oooooo this one looks really good, please keep it up!!