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August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh Sh!t! When I read, "Yes." was all Seifer said." I had to minimize the window and regain my composure before I could finish. Wow. There is such raw emotion in this AFF. It is to die for. Good job bud!
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August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awwww. I love Rinoa in this. She's so thoughtful and sweet. I thought she was like that in the game too! I don't know why so many people hate her. She is thoughtful and sweet. And pretty for that matter. =]. ANYWAYS, The story. Yeaah. It's good so far. And you didn't make any refrence to height. Except that Seifer has a 'taller frame.' I like that. Most fanfictions where one guy is taller by far (six or more), or the guy taller by far (six or more) in a hetro relationship turns me off. I guess I'm weird? But I like how you left them out. =]. Lets me imagine.
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August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Jolly good jolly good. But I fear a breakdown. I hope it's not true. I saw that there was a sequel. That there was a reunion. The summary said something about them 'meeting again.' seriously. that sucks. blleeehhh.
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May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked your story! Thanks!
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May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to say tanks for this amazing fic. It really made my day...hell it made my month ;) Seriously, its been a while since i've read something as good as this and I just thought I'd let you know.
MoOdSwInG
P.S. Oh! and by the way, I've been reading fanfictions for almost 2 years now and your the first author I've actually had thes...s...,or motivation, to review. So I guess you should be rpoud of yourself that you succeded to move me enough to get up from my lazy ass and write something. ;P
MoOdSwInG
P.S. Oh! and by the way, I've been reading fanfictions for almost 2 years now and your the first author I've actually had thes...s...,or motivation, to review. So I guess you should be rpoud of yourself that you succeded to move me enough to get up from my lazy ass and write something. ;P
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September 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Definitely worth the read. Can't wait to read the sequel. *Thumbs up*
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September 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story. Y did u end it now I am going to cry... But I can't wait till the new story. Good luck with it.
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August 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great Story. It's realistic. I like that. And to the others:
You could go and read a PWP story with bondage etc.. They always sound the same.
But why destroy this fanfiction with that kind of stuff? Sorry if this offends you all.
~ te-ruka
You could go and read a PWP story with bondage etc.. They always sound the same.
But why destroy this fanfiction with that kind of stuff? Sorry if this offends you all.
~ te-ruka
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August 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
And this is what i've been waiting for!!!!!Ahhhhh, sooooooooo good.Lol.This chapter is....XD lol.Wow, so discriptive.Mm, I wonder if it does hurt that much.*Sweatdrops* ~.~ lol.
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August 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Brillant! Fucking brillant! i loved it omg so good continue you must! ^_^x