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by Yorda

person Wolf
schedule July 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yay, I was waiting so long for this chapter ^-^ finally!Heheh well I liked it.Aw,they make such a great couple lol.Continue!!
person stormy
schedule July 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YES YOU UPDATTED!!!!!!!!!!

Stormy: What do you think so far duo?
duo: I THINK SHE SHOULD DO A LEMON!!!!! What do you think hee-chan
Heero: baka *pulls duo twoards him and leads him to thier bedroom*
Stormy: o_o um..

AND THERE YOU HAT COT CONTINUE!!!!!!!! ^_^x
person Herald Soucree
schedule July 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
God, the waiting is killing us all. But don't let that make you rush! That's one of the worst things you can do to a fic. I learned that the hard way. A slow romance is more believable.
person Emily
schedule July 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey... come on... a new chapter please? *big, toothy grin*...... okay, that might not work. BUT! I am offering Squall clones at the low, low price of a new chapter! GET YOURS TODAY!
person E-chan
schedule July 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
yummmmm...... but still..... LEMON!!!!!!!!!LE-MON!LE-MON!!LEMON!!!!!!!!!LE-MON!LE-MON!!LEMON!!!!!!!!!LE-MON!LE-MON!!LEMON!!!!!!!!!LE-MON!LE-MON!!LEMON!!!!!!!!!LE-MON!LE-MON!!LEMON!!!!!!!!!LE-MON!LE-MON!!LEMON!!!!!!!!!LE-MON!LE-MON!!L!!!!!!!!!!!!!LE-MON!LE-MON!!LEMON!!!!!!!!!LE-MON!LE-MON!!LEMON!!!!!!!!!LE-MON!LE-MON!!LEMON!!!!!!!!!LE-MON!LE-MON!!LEMON!!!!!!!!!LE-MON!LE-MON!!LEMON!!!!!!!!!LE-MON!LE-MON!!LEMON!!!!!!!!!LE-MON!LE-MON!!LEMON!!!!!!!!!LE-MON!LE-MON!!LEMON!!!!!!!!!LE-MON!LE-MON!!LEMON!!!!!!!!!LE-MON!LE-MON!!LEMON!!!!!!!!!LE-MON!LE-MON!!LEMON!!!!!!!!!LE-MON!LE-MON!!LEMON!!!!!!!!!LE-MON!LE-MON!!LEMON!!!!!!!!!LE-MON!LE-MON!!LEMON!!!!!!!!!LE-MON!LE-MON!!LEMON!!!!!!!!!LE-MON!LE-MON!!
well, i think i've made my point, so.....on with the lemon!!!!!!
person Wolf
schedule July 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow.*_* I loved that chapter,aw ain't Seifer a sweetie?He's so thoughtful,lucly Squall.Lol,ahh,plz continue.I really liked this chapter alot.Good lime smut too ;)lol.
person Mya
schedule July 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god this is to good. You must write more. Please e-mail me when u do. This is so perfect.
person Emily
schedule June 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You're like everybody's favorite author, updating so frequently! Even though the lemon was interrupted, I think this chapter was one of my favorites; the term 'gritty realism' comes to mind, though it wasn't really that gritty. But ya know. You're capturing the situation of a, well, not straight person in high school very, very well. Continue with the fic! I love it. :)
person mikochef22
schedule June 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh, Damn that Quisty!! I love her to death I really do, but what bad timing!!! I mean c'mon, just a little more kissing, poor guys, oh well I guess the wait will be worth it right? Please update soon, Thank You Very Much ;)
person E-chan
schedule June 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LE-MON!!!LE-MON!!LE-MON!!!LE-MON!!LE-MON!!!LE-MON!!LE-MON!!!LE-MON!!LE-MON!!!LE-MON!!LE-MON!!!LE-MON!!LE-MON!!!LE-MON!!LE-MON!!!LE-MON!!LE-MON!!!LE-MON!!LE-MON!!!LE-MON!!LE-MON!!!LE-MON!!LE-MON!!!LE-MON!!LE-MON!!!LE-MON!!LE-MON!!!LE-MON!!LE-MON!!!LE-MON!!LE-MON!!!LE-MON!!LE-MON!!!LE-MON!!LE-MON!!!LE-MON!!LE-MON!!!LE-MON!!LE-MON!!!LE-MON!!LE-MON!!!LE-MON!!LE-MON!!!LE-MON!!LE-MON!!!LE-MON!!LE-MON!!!LE-MON!!LE-MON!!!LE-MON!!LE-MON!!!LE-MON!!LE-MON!!!LE-MON!!LE-MON!!!LE-MON!!LE-MON!!!LE-MON!!LE-MON!!!LE-MON!!LE-MON!!!LE-MON!!LE-MON!!!LE-MON!!LE-MON!!!LE-MON!!LE-MON!!!LE-MON!!LE-MON!!!LE-MON!!LE-MON!!!LE-MON!!LE-MON!!!LE-MON!!LE-MON!!!LE-MON!!LE-MON!!!LE-MON!! c'mon, please!!!??? pweeeeze????? with cherries and whipped cream and chocolate syrup??? (heh heh. you don't HAVE to have all that yummy kinky stuff in the lemon if you don't want. but....)