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Great story so far! ^__^ Keep it up!

i'm surprised there isn't lots of reviews for this fic. it's really good so far.

ch5

Squee, now I want the next chapter, but you have to take care of your other pieces first! My favorite part is still that little "inquisitive to a fault" section. I hadn't really thought of her as curious before you pointed out that someone who's a walking dictionary has to have spent an awful lot of time trying to figure things out while everyone else is yap-yap-yapping. Also, it's hard to start with a rehash of a scene everyone already knows, but your description of the Return of the Legendary Hero is so good that it just puts you right back there to one of the most classic moments of the entire FF series. :D