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Um, isn't Denzel the kid? >_>;

the story refers to cloud being raped. i read both prequels, yet saw no mention of rape. I watched AC but did not play FF7. When did cloud get raped? I'd like to figure out the missing piece.

Hmmmm, you're good. meby you can do some cloud/kadaj? check out my challenge, ^_^

LOL XD VINNY!!! I LOVE KINKINESS AND DIRTY STUFF!!!

Love please give us more .Who woulda thought ?

Holy. F*ck*n. Sh*t. That was so hot. Your stories are the absolute greatest as far as "trying something different" goes, especially with Cloud and Denzel. You have turned me into a huge fan of this pairing, and I'm glad you supply most of the stories, since they're so great. I like how each one is kind of related to the last one. It makes it more special and elaborate, I think.
Anyway, thanks a bunch for writing this story. It is very well-written and the descriptions are beautiful. I love the characters you present in both Cloud and Denzel - how the past still haunts Cloud, and how Denzel's affection for Cloud sprung from the same emotions Cloud had had for Sephiroth, except Denzel is lucky Cloud isn't cruel like Sephiroth had been. Despite the pairing and the sexual acts depicted, Cloud and Denzel seem quite in character to me, and that's what makes this SO good. Its not crack or anything. There's a storyline and you expand on that. GREAT WORK!!

Is this fic finished? Either way, GREAT!!! Please write another.

Love it! Can't wait for more!

You know it's not a pairing I would have thought I'd like but you're really good at writing it where it doesn't seem...wrong for want of a better word. Not just hero worship I guess. But anyway back to the point, I like it I like it a lot you're excellent