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Wonderful!!!!

Amazing absolutely amazing, and really hot also

I love TifaXCloud pairings and yours was definitely hot. It was raw and lustful and awesome. Can't wait to read more from you.

Thank you sooo much for writing this!
And so well too!
I thought everybody hated Cloud/Tifa!
But I love it!

First of all, yay for another Cloud/Tifa fic. :D You have an interesting story going. I really wanna know what's going on with Cloud. I loved this chapter, though, so please update soon!

Oh. My. God. That was pretty hot, but some cc. Put a full space between paragraphs so they don't run together. It makes it easier to read. And Cloud...good gravy! Would that my own husband had th same staying/regenerative powers! I don't think I'd ever leave home. One other thing...I have seen moans and gasps (among other things) in quotation marks. Lots of people use that particular storytelling deice, me included. Sorry, kiddo, you ain't the first. Anyways, great job, keep it up, and keep practicing...good luck!

Hey great begining and they always did care for each other so hope to see an update soon. I hope you will update this story and make it better

WOW,THAT WAS HOT!!!!! ALSO THANKS FOR WRITTING THIS,CAUSE THERE'S DEFINITELY TO MUCH YAIO ROUND HERE

score another Tifa/cloud fanfiction nice work keep it up