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person Phoenix
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, I really really do ^^ I know its not probable that you will add on to it, but I can dream ^^ LOL Please Keep writing this pairing! I love it so much and your just addictive. I'm not sure how many times I've read protecting the lion and its sequel, plus the other ones. I just cant get enough!
schedule February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very real nice
and very realistic
and yes i will be checking out the rest of your stories
person Carro
schedule January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I- I am speechless.. I can't say how great this was with words. It's beyond words. It is without a doubt the best SxS fic ever! Everything is perfect! All great! Ah, can't find any words! X3

I'm definitely going to read more of your fics! You're such a great writer.

Thank you for sharing this story ^^
person Anon
schedule September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Its me again...anime_obsessed_lover@hotmail.com i hate one-shots, they annoy me to tears. i wanna know what kind of revenge Seifers going to indulge in, and whether Squall and him have any more 'this never happened' nights! Lol, and whether he fails that test. Have you considered making this a story or is everyone content on slowly killing me with one-shots that have brilliant storylines to them?
person ishi72
schedule September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was truly refreshing. I love that it's set before...everything. Before all those associative traits become completely ingrained. Makes it both new and sweet and just a little sad. Of course it helps that the story is incredibly hot and well-written as well. *g*

Lovely, lovely story. Makes me fall in love with Seifer/Squall all over again. (just when I thought the pairing had lost all its charm)
person Storm
schedule September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
MMmm great read one of the best I’ve read in a long time! I look forward to more of your fics! To anyone reading the review, who has not read this fic, you must! Great to sit down and read with a nice hot mug of tea (coffee >_< gross) right before bed. I must say that if there is a part 2 where the get this Damian Gray back and some how get in the sack again…*sighs at the ideas that come to mind* I would love to kick Gray’s butt! However I would like to make him pay for what he did to Squall, and that I would personly take my OC’s Wolfblade and de-man (however that is spelled >_< to tired for this!!) that son of a…..hound? No that’s an insult to canines…. Bunny? LOL the tiredness is showing!! *coughs* I get goofy when I’m tired ~_~’ ehh anyway I look forward to reading more of your fics later on, and wish for a short, or long however it comes, part 2 to this fic where they get Gray back at least.

MAN this thing is long enough I’m out good night sweet dreams far well for now – Storm

P.S. feel free to e-mail me if you ever want some story ideas I’m not a write can’t really write well. But I like to give my ideas out in hopes of reading them someday. Oh and the bit about dogs, its cause I love wolves and well dogs are the descanted of wolves so it’s an insult to wolves to say hound, no? And I’m confusing myself O_O and thus at that I’m of to bed >_> goofyness is not good at times like this!!
person Hikaru
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM



Two thumbs up!!

Congratulations ^_^
person ile-o
schedule August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it! I wish I could find anything else to say but... I simply loved it!
person Tenshiaka
schedule August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
One of the better Squall and Seier one shots I've read. I think your wording was very good although some of the descriptive words for the sex seemed harsh in the context. *shrug* Don't know maybe I'm just overly picky about what words I use to describe cock. *laughs* Good though I give it an A-
person Samantha Kaiba
schedule July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good story keep it up....:-)