rate_review Reviews

Wow, I really loved this--very well-written! You kept them in character very nicely, and the pacing of the story was awesome (i.e., not too fast--one of my biggest pet peeves is when authors make their characters suddenly jump into bed together without any logical explanation whatsoever, but you didn't fall victim to this at all). Many of SxS fics I've read just don't strike me as being very believable, but this one definitely was believable! I'll be sure to check out your other works!

Squee! This was VERY well written! Very well. Everything went surprisingly smooth and very realistic. With Seifer being slightly confused as why to everything was going on and why he liked it and for Squall being the complete and utter sexual but slightly hurt uke! You got them in very good character--or as good a character as you can get when the two rivals are screwing each other's brains out--and it was a real *pleasure* to read. I hope to read many more good fics from you!

I really loved your story really awesome
It left me happy and a little sad but most squall and seifer stories do that to me :]

All I gotta say is that I almost feel sorry for that Damien guy, but I don't. Hurting Seifer's Squall in any way will bring about grave consequences. And well deserved in this case. Nice fic. I love to see Squall and Seifer in school together, cause even then they were so meant for each other.

Wow, another first-class fanfic. Not that I was really expecting anything less. I think making a sequel to Search & Seizure would be a great idea, or you could easily turn this into a continuation if you wanted; I would love to see what Seifer comes up with to get back at Gray so I would definitely keep reading. Anyway, I love all your stories, so please keep writing them! Ciao.

I liked your story.

I liked your story.

Wooaaahh....that was hot. Seriously, that was a VERY enjoyable read. I like your style, keep it up!

630 hits and not one reveiw? That's flipping insane.

I really liked the way you characterized both the boys. Most S/S has them madly in love with one another, but you don't do that here, Squall is desperate for affection, and Seifer is oppertunistic (witch si really the only way I ever see them working Pre-game) even when you have Seifer feeling something at the end it comes off in a more "he belongs to me, no touchy" way then a "OMG your my TWU LUV" way. Usually I can't bring myself to really enjoy S/S stuff, I like Rinoa to much, but this really worked for me, kudos.

There were a few spelling/spell check errors (how does 'Worrying' ones lips work?) But noting to distracting, and it's apparent you made the effort. Other then that the whole Gray thing kinda annoyed me, I found myself wondering of he was a plot acential, but I think that comes from my own inane dislike of anyone other than Rinoa touching Squall.

Hope that made sense SO tired (tis 3 Am)

Anyway, good job, niffty lemon.

Damn it I'm dumn, forgot that the 'reveiws' button wouldn't be by the story title here (like over at FF.N) and therefore thought there were none :P *Walks way in shame*