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by jessara40k

person Look at me I'm cheese
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Muy fantastico. loved it. it was absolutely almost 100% perfect. :D
person Hikaru
schedule September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
whoaaaa!!! ^o^ update sooon !!!!
person skydreamer
schedule September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very amazing story, I love that parring and really really want you to write more. PLEASE!
person kyouteki
schedule August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story! I love the way you made cloud and sephiroth act! Especially feral cloud! ANd finally someone told tifa off!
person aura1234
schedule August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is such a good fic, i can't wait find out appens next squeeeee X)
person Sir Magus
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wat? there isnt anymore? plz say it isnt so tell me ur gonna update it soon and post the next chapter b/c this story was really really good and i luv sephitothxcloud pairings-though i would have thought that sephiroth would have been the dominate one but hey it was still a great story i cant wait to read more of it!
person Ann
schedule June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very very good.
schedule June 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is a VERY well written fic. The characters are extremely OOC, and the way you depicted the pairing is very unusual, but you managed to take all that and make it work fantastically. Awesome job with this! The grammar and spelling is excellent as well, and the interaction and dialogue overall is very smooth and well written. It was long, but a very good read so that's a good thing. Please update soon! I look forward to the next chapter!

P.S. Absolutely HOT smex! Wow, I needed a cold shower after that LOL.
person Ly
schedule June 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like the unorthodox way you depict this pairing, also the bond puts a lovely new twist on things. In addition the stuff with Cloud and the Nibel wolf is kind of adorable, once one gets past all the bloodshed. Hope You continue with the story.

ps. Also love Your other story "Responsive", but sadly got a server error when I tried to review it. :(