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Thank you for writing this. I really would like to know what happened. I was searching for a bit of romance with fantasy and action/adventure when I came upon this story and loved it. It was exactly what I was looking for. I read it all in one night. You wrote Vincent how I imagined him to be, and the other characters you made them so real compared to other things I have read. You also made the love scenes more than just sex, which I really appreciated. Even though this hasn't been updated in a long time, I do hope to see the rest of the story pan out.

Oh and congrats on your book being published. ^_^

Carrie?

Nah, don't let Cloud fall into that trap. Setting Cloud up with an OC tends to go to Mary Sue land very quickly. It might be wiser to have Aerith's spirit appeat to straighten him out. She's...really the only one who can.

Good to see that you posted a new chapter, tho it's sad to know that they won't be coming regularly. (Can't complain, though. Life tends to do stuff like that.) Anyhow, good work on this one. So Vincent knew that Lucrecia was dead... but he's right, there's too much to lose to go looking for a dead person. And Cloud has found another woman to fawn over? Can't say I didn't see that coming, but I wonder if her tale will go the same as Aeris'?

Looking forward to the next chapter... whenever that may be...

Good luck in your writing!!!

Femme Fatale

I hope you finish the next chapter soon i miss reading it please please update soon ive been waiting like a month

This is an amazing story!

I just finished this story. Whew. Your writing is simply amazing. There many, many lines that struck me as lyrical and so descriptive. Writing that now I curse myself for not having copied some of them to paste here. It's been a long time since I've been so caught up in a story that I just had to read it start to finish. Also, I usually am not even interested in Vincent fic. But, this is the second VinFic that has gotten to me. Maybe I -am- interested in it... O_O

Your writing is amazing, and off I go to see what else you have done.

REVIEW!!!...that is all

great fic just hope that Lucien gets over his Jenova induced sicness and finds some relief (note I didn't say peace that to me is the equivalent to death) maybe he could finds a girl of his own that he is afraid of getting near cause of his past? okay my own imagination is at work now well cya

I have one thing to say: That was so damn good. . .
Ok I lied. Here's something else: Write more. Thank you!

T_T Damn that Sophia...DIE!!!! ok...:) hehe Lucien is so cute. :D lol