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August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank you. I'm glad that you appreciate my reviews; I only do what I wish any reader would do when I post... which hasn't been for a while... anyway...
It's nice what you did, giving a little insight into Reno's reason for taking Tifa in. I also think that you've done a great job with portraying their sibling-like relationship. I thought that this story may have Yuffie/Cloud, given her apparent infatuation with him, but I have to agree, high mantainence men are way too much trouble.
Speaking of Cloud... how pathetic. I don't know if it's just me, but the brooding, almost self-loathing Cloud seems so in character. He never seems to know what he wants.
In the end Lucrecia had to save Vincent. I wonder how he will cope with the news that she's still alive, Tifa is the mother of his child and said child is in the hands of a woman that seems to be either a psychotic ex, or just a psychotic admirer as part of her twisted experiments? If that isn't a shock to the system, I don't know what is.
And Sophia... she has so many issues. At the rate things are going I have a feeling that her relationship with her partner is going to go sour...
But the one who'll most likely suffer most is Lucien. With Sophia assuming the role of his 'mother', how will he react to finding out what's really going on? If this chapter is any indication, not too well.
This story has really got me interested now. As always, good work and looking foward to the next chapter!
It's nice what you did, giving a little insight into Reno's reason for taking Tifa in. I also think that you've done a great job with portraying their sibling-like relationship. I thought that this story may have Yuffie/Cloud, given her apparent infatuation with him, but I have to agree, high mantainence men are way too much trouble.
Speaking of Cloud... how pathetic. I don't know if it's just me, but the brooding, almost self-loathing Cloud seems so in character. He never seems to know what he wants.
In the end Lucrecia had to save Vincent. I wonder how he will cope with the news that she's still alive, Tifa is the mother of his child and said child is in the hands of a woman that seems to be either a psychotic ex, or just a psychotic admirer as part of her twisted experiments? If that isn't a shock to the system, I don't know what is.
And Sophia... she has so many issues. At the rate things are going I have a feeling that her relationship with her partner is going to go sour...
But the one who'll most likely suffer most is Lucien. With Sophia assuming the role of his 'mother', how will he react to finding out what's really going on? If this chapter is any indication, not too well.
This story has really got me interested now. As always, good work and looking foward to the next chapter!
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August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lucien is growing at rapid rate, oh no he's won;t remember Tifa or will he?
And Lucrisha (can never spell her name) is going to tell Vinny about the baby. How will he react?
Sophia is warper man thinking that Lucien is hers, in her dreams. Glad you enjoy the reviews.
YuffiexReno cool! A lil romance developing there and Reno knowing Sophia's measurements, Classic!
Reno used to date Rufus lil sis, interesting! I can't wait fo rteh next chapter I want to see Vincent's reaction to his son.
And Lucrisha (can never spell her name) is going to tell Vinny about the baby. How will he react?
Sophia is warper man thinking that Lucien is hers, in her dreams. Glad you enjoy the reviews.
YuffiexReno cool! A lil romance developing there and Reno knowing Sophia's measurements, Classic!
Reno used to date Rufus lil sis, interesting! I can't wait fo rteh next chapter I want to see Vincent's reaction to his son.
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August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't believe it! She barely gets to hold him and all hell breaks loose! Anyhow, good work on this chapter, as always. Now that Sophia has him, I wonder what she will do...
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August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That bitch has the baby. Tifa is hurt bad and Vincent is possibly ...
The fic is getting very dark and its nice. I hope Tifa is able to retrieve her lil cherub.
Cloud...I sort of felt sorry for him but he tried his best which wasn't good enough, dude could have omislashed their asses. lol.
I really want to read the next chapter as the cliffhanger is killing me.
The fic is getting very dark and its nice. I hope Tifa is able to retrieve her lil cherub.
Cloud...I sort of felt sorry for him but he tried his best which wasn't good enough, dude could have omislashed their asses. lol.
I really want to read the next chapter as the cliffhanger is killing me.
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August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Quite interesting so far. Looking forward to more.
But I'm just curious if you realize how often you use the word 'lowly' in this fic. Just something to think about.
But I'm just curious if you realize how often you use the word 'lowly' in this fic. Just something to think about.
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August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Kaitlyn is Lucrecia? Who saw that coming? Vincent's gonna be in for a shock when he finds out... if he finds out. Btw, thanks for describing what Lucien looks like. Wings eh? Scary, almost as scary as Cloud finding out. Ah well, he had to at some point, and on the bright side, they know where he is. Looking foward to the next chapter!
Also, I wonder if Sophia was given that name on purpose? It means wisdom.
Also, I wonder if Sophia was given that name on purpose? It means wisdom.
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August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That spiky haired punk ha found Tifa but she needs Vincent not him!
This is not going to be good and Sophia....Vincent is not yours, he's mine! LOL!
Loved this chapter! Yuffie seems to have some sort of romantic interest in Cloud! Maybe it just me!
I loved the twists! Can't wait to see what happens next!
This is not going to be good and Sophia....Vincent is not yours, he's mine! LOL!
Loved this chapter! Yuffie seems to have some sort of romantic interest in Cloud! Maybe it just me!
I loved the twists! Can't wait to see what happens next!
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August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to find out what happens next! The story is interesting and I love your writing. Thanks for sharing! :)
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August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! What did that witch do to poor Vinnie? Tifa got pregnant, that wasn't really surprising. But what do you mean by you could tell it was Vincent's son? Glad to see that Reno isn't being a jerk and is supporting Tifa. What will Yuffie do with what she knows? What will Cloud do? Are they all a part of Sophia's plan, whatever it is? Can't wait to find out!
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August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
She's had a baby boy. If Only Vincent knew. I loved this chapter.
Yuffie knows everything, how will Cloud react? And I hope Peter and Sophia don't take the baby away from Tifa.
I loved this chapter, it showed clearly that Reno sees Tifa as a sister and maybe he sees Yuffie as something else. Even though I saw a hint of Cloud and Yuffie
Can't wait for next chpater!
Yuffie knows everything, how will Cloud react? And I hope Peter and Sophia don't take the baby away from Tifa.
I loved this chapter, it showed clearly that Reno sees Tifa as a sister and maybe he sees Yuffie as something else. Even though I saw a hint of Cloud and Yuffie
Can't wait for next chpater!