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for Honey & Vinegar

by storyless

person Weakchan
schedule May 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am not going to lie, this was absolutely beautiful, and incredibly sensual. The outlining of Auron's past in those descriptive, vital little phrases was chilling and wonderful.
Admittedly, I kind of wish this had been a little longer, but it definitely has a good deal of integrity and power because of how short it is.

All in all, a fabulous piece. I thoroughly intend to check out the rest of your works after seeing this. <3
person AmmonRa
schedule September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh i love this story.....its so sad it ends so quickly!!! will there be more?
person Cacao
schedule August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aw...it seems very promising...I wish it didn't end so soon...