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September 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was very interesting, and highly entertaining. Not in-character, but what the heck. ^^
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October 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow! can i give standing ovations online? that...was so brilliantly written, i'm in awe. seriously, talk about following Auron's character to a T. damn. i have to saw, the opening line did me in. Auron was no lumberjack. i started my chuckling then, and it only grew. wow! so well done!!!! wonderful!!!
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September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Alrighty then. Very good beginning to the story! I love the way you portray the characters. They seem so much like themselves and that makes it good to read for me.
Good Work. Keep Going.
Good Work. Keep Going.
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August 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i loved this story it was sol funny well done
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July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hahahaha, oh my god. That is hilarious. I read a previous review and I gotta agree, the personalities are right on the money! And even with Auron being all stuttery (lol?) that made it more the laughable. And I like how light this story was, is that the right word? Lol. Its actually well written I think, your choice of words made it more fun. Thanks for the read!
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July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe.
I have to say, you really nailed Rikku's personality. I mean, just...Nailed it. Making that come through in the narrative style as well as the dialogue and thoughts, as well as segueing between them seamlessly, is very difficult. Keep up the good work.
I have to say, you really nailed Rikku's personality. I mean, just...Nailed it. Making that come through in the narrative style as well as the dialogue and thoughts, as well as segueing between them seamlessly, is very difficult. Keep up the good work.