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for Lulu Sutra

by Helluin

person khfun159
schedule February 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well that was great. Really descriptive and somewhat believable! I like this pairing a lot.
person Kari
schedule November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
To be honest, I don't usually read the story parts of NC-17 fics. This one, though, this one......I was pulled into the story after glancing at the first paragraph....read every single word AND even clicked onto the next chapter.... Gah. It's so good. The prose itself is *great*. It's one of those things that I wish I could show to all my family and friends.

This is, all around, one of the best stories I've read in my life.
person Rin Leonhart
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved this one. You managed to keep everyone in character, too. Congrats on a great story!
person Shadowy Figure
schedule September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was a amazing story. I don't like to one-shots, but that was well worth it. Bravo.
person Gothikah
schedule August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg! That was amazing! <3
person candice
schedule July 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cheese and rice! That was bloody awe inspiring.
It may seem funny, but to me finding a well written piece of fanfiction is like happening upon a gift. It's like the author is saying "Here. I put my all in into this, I even spell checked it. I'm sharing it with you and you don't even have to pay for it" Fantastic.