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Heh, cute. I normally don't rush into AeriSeph Gothy Angst loving, but this one was cute. I like reading your stuff and look forward to more. *Wishes he was bitten by the plot bug half as often and as good.*

Interesting finale. I don't think I would've ever picture sweet innocent Aerith as an insatiable nympho ^_^ It's very cool, I must say. Only thing is, I don't like this Cloud XD But that's okay, there's always someone I don't like, n_n;

Awesome story! Hope to find more of ya soon.

~RL

So sorry not reviwed before. Geez that Cloud sure is a slutty thing, isn't he XD
Your fics are so spicy, don't get down over lack of reviews! As much a enjoy yaoi myself, there needs to be more MxF fandom around here! :D

Woah. Cloud's so horny he doesn't care who he's doing it with, as long as he gets some. Lol, Cloud is THE man-whore. Oh, and I'm good at math too see? Sephiroth + possesiveness = sexiness like woah. Hehe, I laughed when Seph was all like “Dumb ass, Aerith's mine, I'd never let you take her!" Overall, great chapter Pink Lace!

In short, I heart you. This is probably the best Seph x Aer chaptered fic I've ever read (with lemons to boot)! You described everything well but didn't go overboard and the fact that pretty much all the chracters were IC was definitely a plus too. You seriously rawk, thanks sooo much for writing this! ^_^

I thought Leon's role in this was simply hilarious. He was just like "wtf...might as well watch, for Aerith's safety ofcourse...." Sure Leon, sure. We believe you, lol. ::grins:: It has nothing to do with the fact that you secretly have the hots for a certain flowergirl, ne? Hehehe...can't wait for the next chapter Pink Lace. Keep the lemons coming!

The first five chapters are really awesome - I like Seph's raw passion and how Aerith slowly gives in to temptation and lust, but still retaining an aura of innocence that's very characteristic of her. Leon's attitude towards the relationship was also very well depicted, I think.

And then there's chapter six... XD It truly cracked me up. I'm glad you went for some OOC for Cloud, 'cause having it all angsty would've probably been a baaad idea. I like that he tries to be all chivalrous and knightly, and Sephiroth just looks down on him. That bit at the end, when Sephiroth is telling him he has no sophistication at all really made me laugh. And Leon! Oh my, he was probably the funniest of them all, I don't know why ;p I'm very much looking forward to read what's next - who will win?? The suspense!

~RL

I SIMPLY LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!! *sigh*

Anyways I agree with Dark miss pink, This site is 90% yoai fan girls and they refuse to see male characters interact with females characters unless its either them or an mary sue which ends up being a clone of them really. So don't let the lack of reviews discourage you love you have made a BIG fan outta me, with you lovely writing and very sexy/kinky/proactive plots keep up the good work and ill always review!

Thanks for agreein with me Beauty! ^_^ Glad to know someone does! I'm just so tired of butsecks this and butssecks that, tell me what's so wrong with het? Nothing that's what. Moving on I'd like to say that you have Aerith's character down pretty much and once again I found her IC in this chapter as well. She IS a forgiving person, so I didn't find her OC at all when she was defending Sephiroth (she's not one to dwell on the past either). Lol, Sephy's sexually frustrated. He wants to get it on with Aerith! Haha...this is just getting better and better.

He's being so tender with her, it's almost romantic (even if he didn't intend it to be that way). Aww...I just find that incredibly sweet. So the lemon will probably be waffy and tender ne? That's actually a pleasant change. Looking forward to it, oh wait! Fourth chapter's already up! My bad, lol.