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Aww...poor Aerith. Well atleast the worst is over. I do really think (and hope) that Sephy is developing feelings for her. I mean she's just so darn cute (not in a lesbo way that would just be strange), not even Sephiroth's immune to her charms! Good job describing the lemon overall, but my favorite part? When he went down on her...wow...you described that really well. Can't wait for the next chappie! Competition for Aerith's affections who will win? Definitely Sephiroth!

This is just so unbelievably awesome! I can't believe how fast you're pumping these fics out, plot bunny must be tormenting you ne? Wow...Aer x Seph, plus a good plot? Damn, you're spoling me. Lol, I spottted no grammatical errors whatsoever and the characters introduced thus far were IC for the most part. Oh, and I like the title too (sounds naughty). Anyways keep up the great work Pink Lace, I'll be checking out your other chapters. ^_^

P.S. don't be discouraged by the lack of reviews. Your writing skills aren't to blame, it's just people are either too lazy to click the god darn button at the bottom of the screen and comment or they just don't like Aerith all that much (I've noticed on this website most people are yaoi obsessed fangirls and hate the flowergirl with a passion because qoute on qoute "she's too good to be true").