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You won't ever know who I am, But the 'ScarlretteKnighttress' BIG TIME loves this. Keep going. Keep going, I beg of you.

DO.
NOT.
STOP.

PLEASE CONTINUE...PRETTY PLEASE?

definately off to a great start here...already hooked to see what happens next! oh, the sweet suspense!

Nice style and plot. You make him believable and even a bit vulnerable. Your descriptions of his home were great too. I liked this a lot.

dun duh dun.... I can't wait to read more! You did such an excellent job with Sephiroth's character and I so love him when he's protrayed correctly! Cudois!! Keep it up!

Wowsers. Hot-cha! You have a very precise, detailed writing style, and your story was a quick, entertaining read. Good stuff! I think i'm gonna check your other stuff out too!

This is most certainly an interesting plot; I'm looking forward to seeing what you come up with next. You have a great writing style which is exhibited throughout, very detailed and thorough. Your portrayal of Sephiroth is also very well done. You've depicted him as what I expected him to be: a strong-willed, controlled military persona who doesn't see himself submitting to basic, carnal animal desires that plague men, but like all men, he simply can't resist ;) Please update soon!