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for A ninja toy for Loz

by Scourge

schedule February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sounds good so far! MUST Write more! I was so sad when the story disspeared from the list for a while, but I am very happy it's back!
person Arnubi
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Write more! Poor Yuffie....oh well the bitch deserves it!.....Wait....no no she doesnt, thats mean =*( But write more anyway, hahaha.
person TwiTwi
schedule July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hope you update soon ^.^
person TwiTwi
schedule July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hope you update soon ^.^
person Scarlett Raven
schedule July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow ouch! lol realy like this fic please update soon
person twitwi
schedule July 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Alright I hope you will add more soon unless there was more to the second chapter
person candle
schedule July 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay for LozxYuffie!!! they are so cute together.
about the fic, wow that was hot! lol Loz really knows how to handle a ninja. keep up the good work!
person Yuiko
schedule July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I would like to also see Loz be a good boy and share his new toy with his brothers. ;D
person twitwi
schedule July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey I hope you right some more soon I want to know what happens to yuffie
person Orcagna
schedule July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A very nice beginning, very nice indeed. The pace was perhaps a bit too fast, but otherwise I liked it a lot. There ain't enough Yuffie fics around there, especially those in which she gets raped. The beginning was very promising and I hope that you'll continue this story soon. Hopefully it won't be too short and it'll contain just enough cruelty. Just as I said, promising!