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for First Kiss

by horrorgal

person Rinny Leonheart
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"Is there a trick to this, or what?" he said, between a laugh and a growl. Breaking out of the Desert Prison had been easier than getting this damn bra off.

Brilliant line! Great fic, keep this stuff up!
person ElvenAngel
schedule September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey there, awesome one-shot you've written. I can so see this really happening between them. Very good writting style too! You've got talent!