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July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
For knowing nothing about the Final Fantasy genre and being completely disinterested in it up to this point... NOW my attention has been attracted.
This chapter lives up to a secret fantasy of mine, only half-realized until now. The relationship between a subordinate and boss has always been a sexy possibility in the right context (mafia/military context = GOOD. I think that like a manager/employee relationship is just ick. XD I could NOT imagine boning my manager. SLFKJSLDF.) Add a cute outfit to the mix and things are WIN. Add light bondage and a dash of punishment and I am THERE. Or, I wish I was there.
Fabulously sexy without being overdone. I seem to notice in my writing, my reading, and my role-playing that it becomes increasingly harder and harder to write about sex in such a way that re-captures the imagination. But instead of focusing solely on physical or emotional aspects, you've explored a psycological side of sex that is wholly intriguing to the little sociopath in me. I wish I was Rufus...
Eagerly awaiting more, although I fear what will become of poor submissive Elena. I can almost picture her snapping and taking out her sexual frustrations on her "master." Ha ha, oh wait, no that's me...
This chapter lives up to a secret fantasy of mine, only half-realized until now. The relationship between a subordinate and boss has always been a sexy possibility in the right context (mafia/military context = GOOD. I think that like a manager/employee relationship is just ick. XD I could NOT imagine boning my manager. SLFKJSLDF.) Add a cute outfit to the mix and things are WIN. Add light bondage and a dash of punishment and I am THERE. Or, I wish I was there.
Fabulously sexy without being overdone. I seem to notice in my writing, my reading, and my role-playing that it becomes increasingly harder and harder to write about sex in such a way that re-captures the imagination. But instead of focusing solely on physical or emotional aspects, you've explored a psycological side of sex that is wholly intriguing to the little sociopath in me. I wish I was Rufus...
Eagerly awaiting more, although I fear what will become of poor submissive Elena. I can almost picture her snapping and taking out her sexual frustrations on her "master." Ha ha, oh wait, no that's me...
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July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice. To be honest I don't like either Rufus or Elena but I still liked your story. So many writers here focus on the physical. I like how you showed the thoughts and feelings more, it was very sexy. Good interpretation of the boss-employee dynamics there. :) Also, I like that it's het.