rate_review Reviews

This is one of the best stories I've read of this paring. I agree with your thought that they'd become friends in a unique way. Fantastic job!

Are you sure this is finished? I mean i loved it but...thats it? There are so many loose ends. you cant just...finish it like that? can you? i know im an anon so if you want to say anything to me my email is anime_obsessed_lover@hotmail.com. I'd really love to know in-depth, what you were doing with this story. and i dont mean in a bad way, its really good!

Hello there. Wow. Nice story. But seriously. Ten-year-olds? Goodness. That's a little TOO young to be making out, don't you think. But yeaaahh. It's still a real good story with enough sensory details.Kudos!

Hello there. Wow. Nice story. But seriously. Ten-year-olds? Goodness. That's a little TOO young to be making out, don't you think. But yeaaahh. It's still a real good story with enough sensory details.Kudos!

i don't review lots of the time, but i really liked this story. Good job. And to theabove reviewer... helloo, there was even a warning about Seifer and Sqall going at it...jeepers... dun read something after being warned and then complain about it. Great story DB, I thought the scene was cute! it was definitly just like a young Seifer... or Irvine mayeb. Childhood curiosity is always so amusing. Everyone's first kiss can't be so unique.

I really liked this, really liked it. It's really well done, and I completely agree about how they wouldn't exactly be 'normal' friends. Anyway, I won't waffle on about it. It was a great little story, and I do hope to see more of your work around. ^-^ You've definitely got one avid reader here. Dare I even say stalker? xD

I really liked that story :) thou i was kinda bummed you sorta skipped the sex scene xP

I really liked this part. I like the character of Seifer. It is so funny how he can come to reason on how he is feeling and he thinks its some type of descies lol. Really good job. I can't wait till they meet up again. I also like how you made the rain a big important element in the story. Keep up the good work!

Just dropping you a line. I think this story is really great, I love how you have captured Seifer's and Squall's emotions (and character). It is exactly how I imagined they would be. Please finish this, I am very intrigued to see how their meeting goes.

INFATUATION! DESIRE! MORE! Or...something like that. I'm not completely fluent in Fujin-ese yet. I loved your previous works, Proteting the Lion and Strings Attached and it's marvelous to see more delectable SXS. You should've let Irvine rape Squally in SA though...No, no. Just kidding. I love squall, really I do. But...I love seeing him suffer even more. *grins insanely* Your portrayal of Seifer is exquisate and Squall is very cannon. Keep writing please! I'm not sure which gives me a bigger rush, seeing Squall leave that bitch Rinoa or seeing him make out with Seifer *swoon*. Squall's episode with Cid was kind of...odd. Almost random. You made it sound like Squall had simultaneously been bugged for monthes on end and not at all. How often does Cid get on his case? PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON! *begs*