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Omg! This was such a wonderful and sweet fic! I give mega props because your writing style is really great. You could probab;y turn this into proffesional work if it wasn't copyrighted lol I really loved how kept on the characters' personalities, especially Squall. And I love the part when they were kids. It was really sweet and I could npt stop laughing on Zell's comment. I liked it how you described the charaters without going to crazy detail like some stories do. Also that you didn't go into Rinoa-bashing mode. I actually got to see a side of Squall that I didn't realize was really there, that he actaully thought he acted like an ass sometimes. That he actually thinks that he should be feeling really good about his life. You really desbrined his situation very good and if the game focused on Squall and Seifer as a couple, I see this as part of the sequel. Really excellent job. I cannot wait for the next part. I would really love to read Seifer's thoughts in all this. Keep up the good work!

"Seifer and Squall are making babies." LMAO, that was cute. Good story! :D

That was cute. Please update soon!