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June 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It was pretty good and I like the couple.
Only thing that bothered me were a few grammar mistakes. Even the small ones can make an impact. Like the third sentence of the last paragraph.
"Drawing his cock from his pussy..."
Only thing that bothered me were a few grammar mistakes. Even the small ones can make an impact. Like the third sentence of the last paragraph.
"Drawing his cock from his pussy..."
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July 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hoooooooooooot!
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August 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The WAFF was nice - I love C&T together. Well, basically, I just love Tifa but that's beside the point. The description of his ejeculation was particularly good - the rest seemed a little rushed.
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September 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! CloudxTifa smut is just delicious, and you're doing a fabulous job! Do continue!
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August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Been meaning to review this for a while. Nice, as about all of your fics are. Is there any hope of a Cloud/Tifa dealing with events just after Advent Children?
As always, keep up the good work.
As always, keep up the good work.
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August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good work. liked the pairing, liked the theme. but i prefer your long works. are you going to continue this one?