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I know that this story is old but I keep coming back to it and reading it over and over again. It is one of the best Yazoo stories ever. The characters are perfect, the progression in their feelings is pin pointed and the end is just heartbreaking.
Just beautiful and unforgettable.

Oh, I love this! "Mind Games" is sexy and beautiful. I was eager to see how things played out. Great work!

What a perfect story. I read it all in one sitting--unable to stop--and though it wasn't terribly long, when I finished it was like coming to the end of a long journey. Such gorgeous detail, not overwhelming, and with nothing in excess. And such a beautiful ending! I applaud you. Thanks for the great read!

I have just read this fic and it is brilliant.Yazoo is my fave out of the boys and the way that you have written all the characters in this story is so real i could actually visualize this happening in the movie (would have loved the sex scenes as well) It was sad that he had to die but I am glad that you had the guts to still kill him and the way that you ended with him revisiting cloud was perfect it made you know that they will see each other again and show their true feelings for each other.I hope to see a lot more of your works in the future.....ozyaoi

The moment when Cloud was on his knees and Yazoo stepped forward into his mouth made me fall out of my chair. haha, something about the way you wrote that and the whole story was steamy, seductive, and on the verge of wildness, great work.

This is an incredibly well-written piece of fanfiction, with a wonderful balance between plot development and smut. That you managed to turn it into canon means that whenever I watch Advent's Children, it will never be the same. (In a good way) I very much enjoyed reading it.

OH--MY--GOD!! I absolutely loved this story. It was so well written, and the pairing is now my favourite. Which is why it's sad there aren't many fics with this pairing. Could you please write some sort of sequel? I would really love to read more with these two.

I love all three of your stories posted here. This one was so sad. And so romantic!

I can't belive you killed him!
But this fic was truly incredible, I don't think even my former favorites can top this. I love it so much *huggles* even though it made me cry at the end :).

Am I a bad person for really... REALLY wanting Cloud to die this time? I realized it was following the movie at the end, but is it terrible that I was secretly praying for Cloud to, just this once, go into the light? Poor Yazoo, poor Cloud! They have to wait before they can be together! Knowing that sexy peice of ass was waiting for me, I think I'd commit suicide right there!

PS, that was great. Really.