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for Mind Games

by flippykitten

person BrucesGirl
schedule August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was...heart wrenching. Amazing. Sexually arousing. I don't think I could compliment it enough. Wow.
schedule August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm not sure how to respond to individual reviews on this site (I'm still working my way through all the ins-and-outs of the format/layout) :), so instead I'll settle for leaving a broad thank you here to all those who have left reviews. It means a lot to receive feeback, both positive and constructive, and your comments are much appreciated. Thank you!
person Marcy
schedule August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was so hot! And yes so very sweet.... good job!
person k-girl
schedule August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
DAMN, Cloud and Yazoo are one sexy pairing, lol, keeping updating this because this story is too good!!!!!!!!!!!
person Vampiric Voodoo Mage
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
-^//^- .........
person broken dolls
schedule August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i really like this story and hope this isn't the end, and if it is, then i think i'm gonna cry.
person Zillah
schedule August 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Heartbreaking story really...Knowing that they can't be together. Looking forward to seeing where this story is going. Hopefully prove my imagination wrong?
One thing that I can't help but admire, is how well you captured the characters. Very good work.
person Squallfan
schedule August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good twist at the end of chapter 2. Awesome.
person nihilatrix
schedule August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gods and godesses! This is an incredibly hot story! Please do keep writing, and update soon. I'll be waiting with my drool bucket in hand!
person Anon
schedule August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Such an awesome fanfic! Sooo many juicy details, you can feel the anticipation and tension as you're reading it. I love it!