rate_review Reviews

please update this story! I've read so much fanfiction that it's hard to find any I like. Trust me when i say that i have a high standard. and i love yours. the character's are all righten like they should be. great job overall. update.

this story is interesting but i have to say your ocs kinda ruin it for me. they dont blend in to the story very well.

Really good so far. I love your Reno and Rufus and Tseng and Cloud and...uh...okay I love all of it. It was really great! XD ^_^

This is a wonderful story! You expressed concerns about writing Cloud or Reno out of character, but I think you've done a fine job of them both. Cloud is as aloof as ever. Reno is as playful. Both tragically beautiful in their own way. The way you described Reno's injuries was so realistic; I love this story because so far everything hasn't been all perfectly perfect. There's been pain and struggle and hardship, which makes any story more interesting. SO! What else can I say... I love your little Nicky OC. Hope to see more of him and Ana, and I also think you wrote Rufus' POV very well. I can't wait for the CloudReno or RenoCloud lemon, whichever way it will be. I'm terribly excited about reading your smut with the tantalizing way you described Rufus and Nicky's encounter! I'll be watching for updates! I'm also going to go over to Y! and fave it. XD

...Awww I feel so bad for both of them.
More soon please!

I hope you plan on updating soon! I loved the story!!!

That was the most casual casual sex I've ever read...Rufus needs to get laid, too...

This story rocks!!!!
Pleas update soon!

I liked the interaction between Cloud and Reno. Honestly though, I hated Nicky and Ana--especially Ana. For original characters, they were...well...they kind of ruined the story for me. I was really enjoying it before that. More specifically, I think I found their dialogue unrealistic, and it seemed like their personalities were also very exaggerated; exaggerated shyness on Nicky's part, and very loud, annoying, crude over-familiarity with her brother, on Ana's part.
Besides that though, I enjoyed the story. It's sweet that Cloud is willing to care for Reno. There aren't very many stories where you get to see his kinder side--he's usually portrayed as being a bit of an asshole, or just extremely reserved--which is accurate to the game, I suppose (the asshole part) but I do think he would take pity on someone as injured as Reno.
I wasn't sure if I agreed with Reno's obvious sensitivity to letting Cloud know about his past--he seems like a bold, and even lewd person sometimes. I always thought he'd either come right out and tell people what he'd done for a living like he was proud of it (although deep down he wasn't) or he'd refuse to talk about it at all. Letting Cloud know he was ashamed of it and yet still divulging it to him seemed a little out of character for him--although the tears after Cloud had left didn't. I think Reno carries a lot of scars from those days, he's just constructed many defensive layers to hide them.
Good job on this. I look forward to updates.

I think i reviewed this a while back..will u continue. ^^ I luv cloud and reno together how cute..well almost together..ahh.