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by aeryia

person Luvey
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter
person Luvey
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter.
person Brittny
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I like this story a lot! I was supposed to be studying, but it drew me in until I realized that I barely did any of my midterm assignments (which was like...midnight). My favorite scene was when Squall flipped off Seifer. For some reason, that made me laugh so hard.
This story is creative and I am looking forward to more!
person DB2020
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome! It was definitely worth the wait. While it’s not a crime to lose interest in a story or take a break from it, don’t doubt that there are plenty of readers interested in it. I’m certainly very eager to read more, but I won’t throw anything at my screen if you need lots of time to produce more chapters… I might glare a little, maybe do some pouting…

Anyway, I really enjoyed this latest chapter. I’m loving your Seifer and how deeply he’s affected by Squall after just meeting. I’m definitely in his corner, cheering him on to seduce Squall! And the whole celibacy thing has me on pins and needles. I can’t wait to see how that affects the relationship, whenever they get around to doing echii things together anyway.

It didn’t seem rushed at all. It was nicely paced with good dialogue and action.

Good luck with future chapters!
person Anon
schedule September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
man, this is so good! Update quickly! Please!? Im loving this story, its funny. What was that whole thing with Squall and that Reid person!? Update fast please!?
- i dont have a name on here so i just leave my email - anime_obsessed_lover@hotmail.com
person Sharon
schedule September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
!!!!!!!! Gah !!!!!! I'm gripping the edge of my seat for more. That was simply fantastic. It was perfectly done for a situation that most authors would have written in such a corny nature. I loved it. All the reactions, actions, and dialogue were so plausible that I'm now addicted. After reading the first chapter I was definitely interested and waiting for more, but now it's my sole mission to read every chapter of this story as you publish it. You are among the few writers of FFVIII fiction that make such great stories that I cannot possibly read anything that isn't just as good. I am eagerly awaiting more, but I imagine the creation of such chapters is a time consuming process, so I shall remain patient.
person memorietrail
schedule September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
more please
person Sharon
schedule August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved it!! Now I'm all excited for another great Seifer/Squall story. I can't wait for more!
person YACUMO
schedule August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You must continue this story!!!!
You must!!