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September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this. Really do. Squall is behaving like a kid, LOL! And Quistis bitchslapped him... BOOYAKA!
BTW, you might wanna know this: It's "should HAVE", "could HAVE", "would HAVE", "shouldn't HAVE", "couldn't HAVE", "wouldn't HAVE". Not "OF". Uh, if you think I'm bluffing, please check with a (preferably at least college-level) English professor on this. Sorry, I don't want to insult you, but when I see an otherwise good piece of fic run over with your usual merkin's mistakes, I go a little nutso.
BTW, you might wanna know this: It's "should HAVE", "could HAVE", "would HAVE", "shouldn't HAVE", "couldn't HAVE", "wouldn't HAVE". Not "OF". Uh, if you think I'm bluffing, please check with a (preferably at least college-level) English professor on this. Sorry, I don't want to insult you, but when I see an otherwise good piece of fic run over with your usual merkin's mistakes, I go a little nutso.
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September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i'm a fan of Squall & Quistis, and may i say i love the story! i hope you update soon.
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September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was very Squallish. I think you characterized him very well. It always did take a sledge hammer to get through his hard head. Can’t wait for more. §;o)
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September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You updated!!
I hope Quis won't freak out...maybe Squall won't let her, no? well I just came here to say thanks for this story and please update soon!!
I hope Quis won't freak out...maybe Squall won't let her, no? well I just came here to say thanks for this story and please update soon!!
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September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good direction - at least he's not a totally lost cause. More please.
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September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh boy, Squall really needs a good swift kick in the ass after that one. Kepp itup - I want more! §;o)
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September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aww, I got totaly absorbed into your story.
Poor Squall. Yeah, I can imagine Squall behaving that way. And I never thought of Selphie being a sourcress and Irvine a Knight, but that is believable and the pain they must be feeling must be sharp. I love the way you write and everything. I hope Squall can find Quistis soon! ...well not so soon, coz I like your story and don't want this to finish so soon. thank you for writing this story.
Poor Squall. Yeah, I can imagine Squall behaving that way. And I never thought of Selphie being a sourcress and Irvine a Knight, but that is believable and the pain they must be feeling must be sharp. I love the way you write and everything. I hope Squall can find Quistis soon! ...well not so soon, coz I like your story and don't want this to finish so soon. thank you for writing this story.
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September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please, you must continue on with your fic *begs* I just love Qualls, they rule!
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September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay – I have to admit it, I’m not a huge fan of Squall acting like a first rate – well you know, but I’m very interested to see where you go with this one. It always hurts me to see Squall in pain and causing pain to others, but that’s what makes the really good stories. Can’t wait to see what’s next.