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wow, since i saw how long it was since you last updated, I kind of feared you've dropped the story, and I'm really glad you haven't.

I sense something coming up with this Dennis (does it sound wrong the way I say this?) and I can't wait to see what happens next.

thank you for the update : D

You've made me melt when Squall said that he wanted Seifer in his life

Thanks for the update. It's great as usual. :-)

This continuous "battle" of sorts between Dannis and Squall makes this chapter really worth reading although I already fear his discovering the origin of Squall's scar.

Your writing-style is brilliant and you always manage to keep things interested. Looking forward to the next chapter.

This is one of the best SeiferxSquall fics there is
and I have read many ^^U

I really like how things are going with Seif and Lore. Which is to say... it's nice to read them doing things other than fighting over nothing. xD

I don't normally review because I never know what to say, but I think it's about time I left a comment saying how much I enjoy your work. I love reading it, despite the long wait between chapters. Some of them are a bit extended which I find makes it a little difficult to get right back into the story but the chapters are well worth the wait and a very enjoyable read. I'm especially liking seeing Squall back in the field. So yeah, loving this story, as well as your other ones and I look forward to seeing more.

I loved the pace in this chappie-- and I'm incredibly curious how Squall's going to handle Dannis. I'm torn-- I want Squall to get back to Seifer soon, and yet, the possibilities with Squall handling Dannis are endless.

I know you hear this constantly, but I can't wait for the next chapter! I'm slightly embarrassed to say I've been checking the site for an update every day, and will most likely do so again. This is developing so interestingly!

This fanfictione exceeds all my expectations and I'm just... awed.

It's been a long time since I last read any fanfictions, mainly because the authors whose fics I used to read stopped writing or big archives live noire sensus stopped updating etc. I thought FFVIII was out and no one was interested anymore, and being unable to write anything coherent myself, I had no choice but to search another fandom.

I stumbled across this fanfiction on search of FFVII fanficitions after watching the complete version of Advent Children. It was wholly unexpected and made me real happy.

This is not the first male pregnancy story of squall I've read, but the first which does not mainly deal with the mpreg and the longest (except maybe the life series by sukunami). I love the way the story is going, how you characterize Seifer and Squall and make it all seem plausible. I think this is also the first FFVIII fanfiction I've ever read about them falling in love and not already being attracted to each other at the beginning of a fic.

What slightly irks me is the way Lore and Irvine are characterized, it gives me the overall feeling that Squall the the object of lust of all about men on earch (or that it seems so to those close to him) and that he is unable to see it or do anything against it. The last chapter you updated let me suspect that there will be a scene where he gets molested (or is threated to be molested) by teenage boys and I just can't see that happening to him, seeing how he's been a mercenary all his life and learned and grew up with such persons since he was awfully young.

But your story has pleasantly surprised me many times until now and I think I'll keep on reading no matter where you go with it.

Thank you for writing such a wonderful fic, I can't wait to see the next chapter :D

winter

"Awesome!!!!" wink* No really, these type of stories are rare and few in between that most small errors, are not worth the fuss. I like that Seifer is constantly Seifer-like, I think a romance for them would take this long to come realization. I think this last chapter(42)has brought about some fresh characterization.I would like more Lore/Siefer interaction or them all together on something(no one big happy family) that would be unrealistic.But a common understanding, and maybe a little bit realization to Seifer of Lore= son, blood. I think that Squall can handle the whole freaking world if need be, but yes he could be very oblivious.I love slow stories they are so rare.I don't want Siefer to change too much then he would not be as interesting (to me or squall, I think=)I did want a change of pace, and this last chapter brought it. Squall going on a mission is great.Maybe I think on pacing everything is going so smoothly that we need a bit of spice...a surprise?Trying to help. HonestlY? I just love this story.
Just heads up, My only thing is the longer in between up dates the least people are to check back. It took me almost 3 months to look again when before I would check every week.I love this and I don;t want you to loose any readers. I totally understand RL.