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April 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ahh! Loved the new chapter, didn't want it to end. Thanks for sharing.
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April 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeesssssssssssssssssssssssss <3<3<3<3<3
Passionate chapter!
Dialog is great, when it leads to things, and these two need all the in-between dialog they can muster. Seifer's dependence is really so terribly heart warming and kute, and really, it will be TORTURE for everyone, not just those two (*everyone meaning us, the fangirls) to be separated, but it'll be great to see Squall in Commander mode again, w/out someone followin' him and naggin' *pinches Irvine*
Oh man... it's an addiction this story. You wait and wait and wait for a hit, and when the dealer finally comes around OH MAN is it worth the wait.
WHOOSH
*bliss*
<3
Look forward to the next, as always. Take care and bribe those muses. XD
Passionate chapter!
Dialog is great, when it leads to things, and these two need all the in-between dialog they can muster. Seifer's dependence is really so terribly heart warming and kute, and really, it will be TORTURE for everyone, not just those two (*everyone meaning us, the fangirls) to be separated, but it'll be great to see Squall in Commander mode again, w/out someone followin' him and naggin' *pinches Irvine*
Oh man... it's an addiction this story. You wait and wait and wait for a hit, and when the dealer finally comes around OH MAN is it worth the wait.
WHOOSH
*bliss*
<3
Look forward to the next, as always. Take care and bribe those muses. XD
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April 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent update as usual. I check everyday for your updates and I get so excited when there finally is one. I love this story soo much. Keep up the great work. I'll be watching for more updates. Happy Easter! Hope your holiday was a good one.
Xander
Xander
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March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
re-reading ch.41.. i don't want to say it felt rushed, but it did feel less passionate than the previous chapters where S & S interact.. the 'passion' between them is something that you've managed to articulate so well thus far, tension, anticipation, desire, etc. @____@ I hope all is well and that the boys are behaving~
I really look forward to your next update!
I really look forward to your next update!
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February 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I don't think it's drawn out at all. It's just perfect. I love this story. It's excellent.
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January 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hot shit...damn good chapter. You're doing fine with your pacing. We have to keep in mind, there's always been a connection there after all. It's just...growing....greatly.
I LOVED Laguna there. He is handling everything VERY well ^^
~Leaf~
I LOVED Laguna there. He is handling everything VERY well ^^
~Leaf~
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January 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i'm really enjoying reading your story, and i don't think that its drawn out at all. although i'm knida querious is Squall ever gona become pregnat again? or was it just a one time thing
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January 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"Please tell me what you think. I’m trying to ease into the love thing, even if the story is already getting ridiculously drawn out"
Not all my dear. In fact I consider this one of the most congruent and lined stories ever, and beleive me because I have had my ups and downs with it.
In fact I really find fascinating how well you describe and put together the characters, specially the growing fondness between such strong personalities as Seifer and Squall.
I am not a big fan for long stories or multichapter ones, but yours I have been following it since the begining and most of the chapters have been soo descriptive and well made that it is really interesting to read the latest one just to see what is it going to happen. When an author has the ability of surprising most of his readers is beacuse you are doing a fucking hell of a job my friend.
At the begining of your storie, I was not very happy with many things that were happening.... lol.... specially how sometimes the chpters were kind of damn short, but as I kept reading I realized tha in fact your way of writting is not only very interesting but also extremely entertaining; the descriptions that you use, your vocabulary, the way in which you can pass from one character to the other with such ease that is is really wonderful to understand where you story might be heading to.
And wow...this is like the longest review that I had ever made!!! LOL
Anyway I hope you also had a gorgeous christmas, thanks for your update and I really wich to read you soon.
Regards xoxo
Not all my dear. In fact I consider this one of the most congruent and lined stories ever, and beleive me because I have had my ups and downs with it.
In fact I really find fascinating how well you describe and put together the characters, specially the growing fondness between such strong personalities as Seifer and Squall.
I am not a big fan for long stories or multichapter ones, but yours I have been following it since the begining and most of the chapters have been soo descriptive and well made that it is really interesting to read the latest one just to see what is it going to happen. When an author has the ability of surprising most of his readers is beacuse you are doing a fucking hell of a job my friend.
At the begining of your storie, I was not very happy with many things that were happening.... lol.... specially how sometimes the chpters were kind of damn short, but as I kept reading I realized tha in fact your way of writting is not only very interesting but also extremely entertaining; the descriptions that you use, your vocabulary, the way in which you can pass from one character to the other with such ease that is is really wonderful to understand where you story might be heading to.
And wow...this is like the longest review that I had ever made!!! LOL
Anyway I hope you also had a gorgeous christmas, thanks for your update and I really wich to read you soon.
Regards xoxo
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January 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ridiculously drawn out is O~~K~~~ay. ^_________^ And pacing yourself so that the boys have time to come to terms with what all is happening is a nice approach, instead of the "spontaneous revelation" angle. :3 I'm SO very happy you updated!! And, as always, looking forward ((with much anticipation)) to the next chapter.
I'm curious~ (not even considering the length of the story already) but the approaching mission to the Uncharted Island............ that could be an angle that could add some additional conflict, that of course, could result in some deep soul searching. Nothing like a few nasty surprises to stir things up a bit. ^_^
##HUGS##
I'm curious~ (not even considering the length of the story already) but the approaching mission to the Uncharted Island............ that could be an angle that could add some additional conflict, that of course, could result in some deep soul searching. Nothing like a few nasty surprises to stir things up a bit. ^_^
##HUGS##
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January 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Drawn out is good! That's one of my fav things about this story, that it is not rushed. I knew Squall would be the first to wonder if it's love, and it looks like he'll realize the truth soon. Seifer on the other hand...he'll be helluva confused, I bet XD I don't think I reviewed your story before, I just wanted to say it's fantastic and that my favorite scene is when they are standing in the kitchen and Irvine walks in on them :) Oh, and I hope Seifer starts to show some signs of caring about Lore soon. It is so sad that he calls him 'boy' and sees him as an obstacle. Laguna rocks btw :D Thank you and I'll be anxiously awaiting next chappie!