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i am loving this story can't get enough of it.
i know you said you will be slow to update, but i beg please hurry.

*le gasp*! A new chapter! I had given up hope. Good to know you won't be abandoning the story. Putting your life and school work first is the right thing to do. I like that Seifer is making an effort to get on his son's good side. Your story is well worth the wait for new updates. Thanks for sharing.

Absolutely wonderful to see an update. You did a good job with it too. I loved how..despite the awkwardness, it still felt like a good friendly get together...And I'm glad to see Lore slowly seeing more than the Bastard side of Seifer.
Wonderful job, well worth the wait.
~Leaf~

I love your character development and story progression, you don't rush into things - which is a common mistake(!) - yet you don't dwell on them for too long. Thank you for giving us a great story! x

YAY!

I have waited this long for this update, i will not abandon you now. I truly enjoy this story, it is a beautiful work of true story-telling. Thank you for writing it. I await the next chapter with baited breath.

~Sophie Max-Anderson



--This is truly a wonderful tale. Thank you, the literature world is truly a better place with this among the fine works that the world presents.

==Rikash Moonsword

It goes without saying,but since I'm so grateful, I'll say it anyway. Thanks for the update! I think you've reminded all of your readers how Seifer's intentions with Squall are still cloudy and made us realize just how vulnerable Seifer is to Squall. The Raijin-Squall conversation saw to that.

I'm glad Lore is finally slowly starting to accept Seifer, well not accept, but realize that he's not that bad, even if he doesn't like him. And you gave us an image of how Squall is different from women when it comes to Seifer. Squall is actually something Seifer can chase and WILL chase. Which is good to see, since most men are cowards. Can't wait for the pre-christmas update!

I will wait for your updates no matter how slow they come :) And in the mean time I enjoy the other stories you've written. As always I enjoy your chapters. You know I have my eyes on you :D

You just made my day with your update! <333

Aww. I really like that Lore is getting to be sort of okay with Seifer... who behaved himself for once! Amazing.

Had to change my e-mail cause it locked me out of my account. Anyways on with the review. So the next chapter is about sex again? Hmm, oh well. I cannot wait until there are more Seifer/Lore interactions. :D I totally love those even though there are only a handful so far.