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for Defining Love

by DB2020

person A
schedule October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I just read this in one sitting and god, this story is beyond amazing. I really like how different this story is from your other (dare I say it) masterpieces (protecting the lion & its sequel) but still as good, if not better -- I like that you're patient with the characters, not rushing them to jump into the twu wuv 4eva asap but actually taking time to develop their characterizations. And seriously, you write the best foreplay/kissing/sex scenes. I look forward to reading future updates from this wonderful story.
person sirianah
schedule October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. There was no intimacy, but... what of it? You have a plot to develop too. It was a great chapter nonetheless. Raijin's chat with Squall was a nice surprise. That'll probably get Squall to think...
person asialisek
schedule October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
;_; cruel............ splitting in 1/2.. **whimpers**

I'm SO SO SO glad you won't disappear! School comes first, fangirlz second. :D I don't mind.
A sweet, mild chapter were we get a little more into the possibility of some kind of truce between Seifer and Lore. **nods nods** And tension~ lol. oooooooooooooh.. sooo long to way for x-mas~~~~~ **wobbles** soooo loooong... but I'll wait, we'll all wait!
THANKS!!!! <3
schedule October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*sighs* I've had my fix. I'll live for another few weeks. Please update again soon. I love this fic.
schedule October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ugh! I want more. I just reread it for like the twelfth time. I think I need another hobby besides reading fanfiction. All I can say is that I will be impatiently awaiting updates on this fic and I hope that they will come sooner, but I know how busy life can be, so I hope you get the time to continue soon.
person barrsa
schedule October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so in love with this story! I can't wait to read more :D
person asialisek
schedule October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
sooooooooooooooo **passionate~~~~~~~~ X9 **re-reads again**
person asialisek
schedule October 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
sooooooooooooooo passionate~ **goes to re-read again**
person telyna
schedule October 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please please please continue this story. there are so little good ones out there anymore.
person axehole
schedule October 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hmmm.. sorry i draw a fanart pic, and i named it after yer fic protecting the lion... and its for you. so... gah.. this is hard to do... *gets on his knees* Please continue this fic! I'M BLOODY HOOKED LIKE A DRUG ADDICT!! *grhm*.... so the pic is here: http://axehole.deviantart.com/art/Protecting-The-Lion-100017927 if you want to see how i rape ff characters