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September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
CMON! Update!
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September 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hello hello DB2020-san~
I'm not here to nag. *shakes head* no no. I wanted to lend support if I could. Since I discovered your fictions, I've become an instant-o-fan. Today, you came up in an ongoing discussion I was having with Sukunami-san Title Pending. We were worried that updates are happening less frequently, and that things in the real world *this being all speculation* are taking priority.. which .. really is how things are supposed to be. BUT, we, and I, wanted to express that we LOVE LOVE your stories, your take on SxS, your talent for expressing them and the WAY you write are WONDERFUL.
I hope hope hope that you'll come back to us (the fans) and share again soon. We ALL look forward to an update, but most importantly, for your take on SxS fandomness. We miss you~ and not just for the sweets ya give us, but BECAUSE it is you that is giving us those sweets~ lol~ makes it all the sweeter. :)
chap.39 comments --
I was thinking.. where 39 leads of, and because the relationship btw Seifer and Squall is escalating.. I was thinking it'd be interesting if a real conflict arose, as such a possible new sorceress or some war or not.... with the way things are going for them, it would be great to see how they take their new found relationship and apply it to the style of the mercenary world. ............................... of course.. i have an ulterior motive for suggesting a new sorceress............................................. i mean.. Squall is still young enough... and.. Lore.. needs to learn to share anyway.. lol **wiggling eyebrow suggestive //which'is'somewhat'uncoordinated'and'disturbing** I hope you have a clue as to what I'm hinting at. No way is this my story, *pouts* but since you don't have an LJ or blog, we're clueless as to what's goin' on and thus, IF it is a possible writers block, I'd like to throw some stuff out there. I totally can't even predict what you have in mind.. which makes the anticipation all the sweeter.
**sweet tooth AND hopeless romantic combo**
XD
Please take care!
And come back to us IF and WHEN you can!!!!!! WE MISS YOOOOOOOOOOOU!!!!!!!!!!!
I'm not here to nag. *shakes head* no no. I wanted to lend support if I could. Since I discovered your fictions, I've become an instant-o-fan. Today, you came up in an ongoing discussion I was having with Sukunami-san Title Pending. We were worried that updates are happening less frequently, and that things in the real world *this being all speculation* are taking priority.. which .. really is how things are supposed to be. BUT, we, and I, wanted to express that we LOVE LOVE your stories, your take on SxS, your talent for expressing them and the WAY you write are WONDERFUL.
I hope hope hope that you'll come back to us (the fans) and share again soon. We ALL look forward to an update, but most importantly, for your take on SxS fandomness. We miss you~ and not just for the sweets ya give us, but BECAUSE it is you that is giving us those sweets~ lol~ makes it all the sweeter. :)
chap.39 comments --
I was thinking.. where 39 leads of, and because the relationship btw Seifer and Squall is escalating.. I was thinking it'd be interesting if a real conflict arose, as such a possible new sorceress or some war or not.... with the way things are going for them, it would be great to see how they take their new found relationship and apply it to the style of the mercenary world. ............................... of course.. i have an ulterior motive for suggesting a new sorceress............................................. i mean.. Squall is still young enough... and.. Lore.. needs to learn to share anyway.. lol **wiggling eyebrow suggestive //which'is'somewhat'uncoordinated'and'disturbing** I hope you have a clue as to what I'm hinting at. No way is this my story, *pouts* but since you don't have an LJ or blog, we're clueless as to what's goin' on and thus, IF it is a possible writers block, I'd like to throw some stuff out there. I totally can't even predict what you have in mind.. which makes the anticipation all the sweeter.
**sweet tooth AND hopeless romantic combo**
XD
Please take care!
And come back to us IF and WHEN you can!!!!!! WE MISS YOOOOOOOOOOOU!!!!!!!!!!!
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September 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was a long chapter, and it was great. All the best elements of story and smut mixed into one surperb serving. I hope you'll consider getting another one up soon, I've been following this story forever and can't wait to see how Lore and Seifer interact in the next chapter.
-ZE
-ZE
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August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
such great story! Thanks for con
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August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, this story is really good so far. I rather enjoy it. I have spent the last three days reading, and it was definately worth my time. My only big issue is in some word choice. You constantly refer to Seifer with the same title. "Ex-knight". After thirty-nine chapters, it gets really redundant and starts grating on nerves. And, if it isn't "ex-knight", then it is "rival", or "the blonde man". But really, there are only three main things you call Seifer. And Squall. "Leonhart" gets really redundant too. And, for him, if it isn't "Leonhart", then it is "rival". You don't use brunette very often, which is okay, but the word choice needs to be mixed up a bit more. Other than that, the only real mistakes are in grammar. The spelling is faulty sometimes, and articles are frequently missing. All of these are simple errors that happen, and don't really detract from the story. The only thing you should worry about is the bad word choice.
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August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm definately liking this story so far. I am at 23 hours awake, many of those spent reading this story so far. Well, many as in the last...11 or 12. Off and on for the last 11 or 12. Anyways, I'm trying to stay up for at least 24 hours before I crash, but I am doubting my ability to do that as of right now. I really want to finish this story.
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August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am loving your story!! I've always been skeptical about this pairing but now I'm eager to find other good stories about them. I love that you've kept Squall and Seifer in character. It would be too unreal if they had instantly fallen in love and were suddenly gushing over one another. I'm glad I came across your story. I look forward to the next chapter. Thanks for sharing.
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August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yi! update! PLEASE!!!!! I wanna know what happens next!
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August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! It took me nearly a week total to get through this story, but it was worth it! I hope you continue this, I look forward to reading more!
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July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am in love with this story, and subsequently, in love with you.
Can't wait until the next update.
Can't wait until the next update.