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for Defining Love

by DB2020

schedule June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Update again soon. I really love this story. You are a very talented writer and I can't wait to read more of this.
person kinkibob
schedule June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i really love this story and I can't wait until Seifer and Squall's relationship deepens. But Lore... is annoying... and gives the impression of having feelings for his own father... is that on purpose. I wish he was... less "you cant have my dad because then I wont see him as much!" and more "whatever I still hate you and i'd like you to meet my bf/gf." He seriously needs someone in his life.
person Anon
schedule June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
thank god your back! awesome chapter, cant wait to see more!
person Layla
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Noooo!!!! It was going so WELL so HOT and then SHA-BAM!! T_T

I can hardly wait for the next update!
schedule June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please update asap!
person Kamels Kiss
schedule June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Must say I have thoughly enjoyed this first installent of your well written story....I actualy decided to look for some FF8 stories to read and yours caught my eye..thank you
person ~Zoe~
schedule May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I do love this story truly and you have given me a clear point in writing. I wish you would update quicker but like so many good things it takes time and I am willing to wait. It truly was a good chapter and I liked how you ended rather than a good night kiss because I could see it better this way. Keep up the wonderful work.

Always a Fan
~Zoe~
person Rangiku
schedule May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOO~~~~~~~~~
that's wat i was screaming when i read the last few lines...
it was unexpected, really..

i tot somehow seifer will be able to smooth talk squall into accepting their relationship...
but then, with the kind of person that seifer is..
i think d way you carried with the story is better.
it keeps me anticipating for the following chapter.
ur fic is alwaz the first that i check for updates wheneva i can on9.
>,<
so, i'm really really really happy with ur update..
it was the usual great work of yours!~

ganbatte for the next chapter
as a great fan of urs, i'll be patiently waiting ^^
person Kwolf
schedule May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
SOOO goood, please update sooner! I need more, noww!
person bouncing_baby_bunny
schedule May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG......it's about time. LOL This is by far my favorite fic..and i've been through this entire site! I absolutley love it. Keep going...dear gawd keep going LOL I'm such a fangirl! They are just to hot. I love how you keep them in character. Most stories I read everyone is way OOC. You seem to got though. Excellent just excellent...teehee....so keep updating i look forward to drooling on my keyboard some more!