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Wow! A pregnancy scare, almost revelations of love, all edge of my seat moments but nothing was better than Squall and Seifer working like a well oiled machine in the kitchen. I hope Rinoa reacts kindly to their relationship when she finds out. Back tracking afew chapters, the bond or teamwork of Squall and Diablos during their mission was awesome and cool and so right. And Seifer's bonding with Lore, sort of, during gunblade training was priceless. But even for the shortest moments of words Laguna always steals any scene he's in its like you created the man yourself.

Chpt 43 was sooo good, I loved the time spend of Seifer and Lore sparring, Laguna giving Seifer the business about being a father that was my favorite part. I liked the T-rex battle I'm usually bad at visualizing written action and abttles but that was good and easy to see. Can't wait for more.

Seifer: “I don’t need one. I’m fucking adorable no matter how old I am.” Best line ever and so true. You're Seifer is so dead on its amazing and applaudable. Chapter 42 I think so sweet the entire moment before Squall had to leave for his mission I loved it! I hate the separation but can't wait to see what comes out of it.

I never finish a chapter without feeling good afterwards, the story just keeps getting better. I just wish the Seifer/Lore relationship would smooth out faster because they're sweet when they aren't arguing. He is the best OC character ever and I wish there were more stories about Squall and his son the family dynamic is my favorite.

I love Laguna and Lore's moments and Squall and Lore's moments they made chapter 39 great. I can't believe Raijin really doesn't want Seifer with Squall shouldn't happiness of a best friend be enough. Can't wait to read more.

I'm up to chapter 39 and its all still so good and so.... captivating. A little awkward at times on the details of Seifer and Squalls sexual moments, only at first but the more they do it the better it gets. I can't believe the first date was ruined! And things were so sweet up until that stupid trust word came into conversation. Speaking of trust I wanna trust you to finish writing this someday because in your authors notes you said and I quote "I have no intention of abandoning this story, so even if it takes me forever to update, there will eventually be an update." Crossing my fingers that you eventually do. Its so good and will be worth the wait I'm sure.

I recently started re-reading some of my favorite fanfics, and was pleasantly surprised to see some updates on this one! You've done a lovely job with Squall and Seifer's incendiary relationship...I feel like Squall's motivations in particular are beautifully done; clear, without seeming overly explanatory. There are a handful of ongoing fics that I bother coming back to, and this will remain among them. Looking forward to more from you!

This story only gets better with each passing chapter. First of all I looooved chapter 29, the whole ordeal with Seifer consoling Squall after Cale died every little bit of it was perfect and the moments of Seifer and Irvine afterwards were very entertaining. I feel bad for poor Lore I hate the father/son rift between them right now but its kind of needed. You've convinced me to read your other stories after I finish this one. Good stuff.

Gasp! You killed Cale! I knew that Luca was trouble but geez and poor Squall having to deal with this after Seifer's near rape and breaking up with Cale. Its sad but not as much as it should be for me. I'm so enthralled in this please finish writing soon.

*gasp* chapter 26, Seifer and Squall finally unleashing their lust wow didn't think it'd happen like that but I liked it. Can't wait to see how this turns out